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60AppleCrumble
This is so good, I love the line 'And set the clouds ablaze', its really well done. Good job :-)
60AppleCrumbleThis is so good, I love the line 'And set the clouds ablaze', its really well done. Good job :-)
8/20/2006 c1 270dustytiger
wow, this is really good too, what i've read of yours is always very metaphoric and it works really well for your pieces, this one is just beautiful you're a great writer thanx for the review and the tip (about spacing, i thought that myself but i couldn't find a logical place for spacing i tend to like stanzas to be symmetric in my own peices) anyway great job on this i love it and thank you for sharing as well
270dustytigerwow, this is really good too, what i've read of yours is always very metaphoric and it works really well for your pieces, this one is just beautiful you're a great writer thanx for the review and the tip (about spacing, i thought that myself but i couldn't find a logical place for spacing i tend to like stanzas to be symmetric in my own peices) anyway great job on this i love it and thank you for sharing as well
4/6/2006 c1 nofaceme
I really liked how the last line in this really tied the ideas together so well. I really enjoyed this one! Keep it up.
I really liked how the last line in this really tied the ideas together so well. I really enjoyed this one! Keep it up.
2/9/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
Beautiful. So unique. You once again write about a painter who sounds as though he/she asks for your opinion on what to paint. but you sound as though you would give it, even if they did not ask. Intresting.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
197the Stranger in the moonlightBeautiful. So unique. You once again write about a painter who sounds as though he/she asks for your opinion on what to paint. but you sound as though you would give it, even if they did not ask. Intresting.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight.
1/14/2006 c1 10just a teardrop
the first line is great :D and i love the last stanza. great imagery! thnx for the review!
10just a teardropthe first line is great :D and i love the last stanza. great imagery! thnx for the review!
1/12/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The flow in the first stanza works really well. The ending sums up perfectly. Good write.
879Moondog DozierThe flow in the first stanza works really well. The ending sums up perfectly. Good write.