for Prabbles6/22/2007 c7 The Waitress
I actually liked this one. It could use a bit more detail and smoother wording but in itself the message is powerful
I actually liked this one. It could use a bit more detail and smoother wording but in itself the message is powerful
10/3/2006 c1 
16Enigmatic Night
Hillarious!
I quite enjoyed that, despite it's lack of 'whatever it is we strive to attain' it's a good concise poem.Albeit a tad bit disturbing... I love the last line...gets me every time.
LoL You've accumulated quite the uh "Fan Base" (if you can call it that) here...
Remember smile! It confuses people.
16Enigmatic NightHillarious!
I quite enjoyed that, despite it's lack of 'whatever it is we strive to attain' it's a good concise poem.Albeit a tad bit disturbing... I love the last line...gets me every time.
LoL You've accumulated quite the uh "Fan Base" (if you can call it that) here...
Remember smile! It confuses people.
9/23/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Interesting poem; nice writing! I love how it all rhymes so perfectly and it works. :) It is a 6 line rhetorical question, i think that is interesting how you pulled it together so nicely. Great job! :) Short but sweet. ;)
41sarah1491Interesting poem; nice writing! I love how it all rhymes so perfectly and it works. :) It is a 6 line rhetorical question, i think that is interesting how you pulled it together so nicely. Great job! :) Short but sweet. ;)
8/19/2006 c1 With Rhyme and Reason
Heh. Very nice. I was a little nervous to see just one rhyme, but you manage to pull it together AND incorporate quite an impressive theme. Very good.
J
Heh. Very nice. I was a little nervous to see just one rhyme, but you manage to pull it together AND incorporate quite an impressive theme. Very good.
J
6/19/2006 c1 lalaLAMA
Wow, your poetry sucks. Im an english major at UCLA and trust me. Your poetry has no sense on concept. Its honestly just a mix of playable words put toghether. I hope theres something else your good at, because this is not your strong point
Wow, your poetry sucks. Im an english major at UCLA and trust me. Your poetry has no sense on concept. Its honestly just a mix of playable words put toghether. I hope theres something else your good at, because this is not your strong point
5/13/2006 c15 306Ashelin
This is a bit of an odd collection of poetry...I think I like the first one best, even if it is scary.
306AshelinThis is a bit of an odd collection of poetry...I think I like the first one best, even if it is scary.
5/7/2006 c5 8Written
Drat indeed. THIS IS SUCH GOOD RHYMING PLZ KEEP RITING OKAY?
I shouldn't make fun, considering the poems you're making fun of are probably like mine.
8WrittenDrat indeed. THIS IS SUCH GOOD RHYMING PLZ KEEP RITING OKAY?
I shouldn't make fun, considering the poems you're making fun of are probably like mine.
4/26/2006 c6 27Typewriter King
I'm giving you a ROFLcopter for Christmas.Perfect rhyme scheme!♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥
27Typewriter KingI'm giving you a ROFLcopter for Christmas.Perfect rhyme scheme!♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥