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3/12/2009 c1 thekidd
Just simply beautiful,

your astounding.
3/1/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
"your cheeks bleeding red moons"... "like night time suicide"...

gorgeous. need i say more? the rhythm & wording is all so PERFECT, tis most impossible not to fall momentarily in love...
1/21/2006 c1 69this is britt
I really liked this. Thanks for your review, btw. Interesting concept and nicely portrayed.
1/14/2006 c1 20Infection
loved the ending.
1/13/2006 c1 11airplanes in the sky
=) keep it up fronald.
1/13/2006 c1 33forsakensmile
Very beautifully written.

"To trace the white scars with your fingers"So very pretty.
1/13/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Light, even airy, then you get to the second to last stanza, and the contrast, good work with the differentiation of form and substance. I like the lines, "A squad of night lights-as they graze the sky", simple, and yet it really opens up the flow well. Good write.
1/12/2006 c1 16insomnia in dreamland
this was so beautiful. "To trace the white scars with your fingersyour cheeks bleeding red moons" i loved that part. i loved the metaphors but they had so much meaning behind them. everything was so descriptive & this poem just seems written to perfection. ( this deserves a spot on my fav's shelf )
1/12/2006 c1 33Ghostwriter Revealed
All I can say is simply... WOW. Keep writing...

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