for Notice Me11/8/2006 c1 
243ShadowFane
Excellent. That's it; you're going on my fav. authors list. So there. ;)
SF
243ShadowFaneExcellent. That's it; you're going on my fav. authors list. So there. ;)
SF
4/28/2006 c1 untilI
Was the rhyme supposed to work out to the end of the poem? If done intentionally, great work. But, no wonder Jim left. If it was much longer, I would have left too. Over all, great job. Annoying poem, but it has it's point.
Was the rhyme supposed to work out to the end of the poem? If done intentionally, great work. But, no wonder Jim left. If it was much longer, I would have left too. Over all, great job. Annoying poem, but it has it's point.
2/7/2006 c1 4run rabbit run
i like how harsh this is...
and i have a feeling you were making fun of me for something i wrote recently. i laughed, to tell you the truth. at least you tried...
-no one asks questions anymore...-
anyway... cheers anyway...
4run rabbit runi like how harsh this is...
and i have a feeling you were making fun of me for something i wrote recently. i laughed, to tell you the truth. at least you tried...
-no one asks questions anymore...-
anyway... cheers anyway...
1/19/2006 c1 36Christine Ashworth
I know this feeling. Stupid freshman (No offense if you are a freshman btw) anyway, the poetry is simple, but that is nice. Its not really complicated and doesn't make my head hurt when I read it.
36Christine AshworthI know this feeling. Stupid freshman (No offense if you are a freshman btw) anyway, the poetry is simple, but that is nice. Its not really complicated and doesn't make my head hurt when I read it.
1/18/2006 c1 140happypills03
k theme u have going.. poor choice of rhyming words..its okay though..ull get better :)
140happypills03k theme u have going.. poor choice of rhyming words..its okay though..ull get better :)
1/17/2006 c1 32In State of Agony
You dont have to rhyme everything...sorry but i think its to forced and i dont like that, like the idea but not the way you espress it...i think that u have to put more feelings to ur work, you say it! write when you are sad...it maybe help you, of course is just my point of view, other people cant relate to your work, m girl your other writhings are to extends...I still try to read the short ones, like the poems not tales...please try to write just one without the rhyme thing... make a experiment... thats all
32In State of AgonyYou dont have to rhyme everything...sorry but i think its to forced and i dont like that, like the idea but not the way you espress it...i think that u have to put more feelings to ur work, you say it! write when you are sad...it maybe help you, of course is just my point of view, other people cant relate to your work, m girl your other writhings are to extends...I still try to read the short ones, like the poems not tales...please try to write just one without the rhyme thing... make a experiment... thats all
1/13/2006 c1 enjoy the silence
Yes! I can so relate. I wish guys weren't so stupid. Usually the geeky ones are just too emotionally dumb to get this stuff. Unfortunately, I'm a popular girl who loves geeky guys. lol
Love your work. Connie
Yes! I can so relate. I wish guys weren't so stupid. Usually the geeky ones are just too emotionally dumb to get this stuff. Unfortunately, I'm a popular girl who loves geeky guys. lol
Love your work. Connie
1/13/2006 c1 13Donut prayer
I know you can be pain reviewing people, but some of these people are just plain wrong. The world needs people like you to invent the parachute to teh person who made the plane.
13Donut prayerI know you can be pain reviewing people, but some of these people are just plain wrong. The world needs people like you to invent the parachute to teh person who made the plane.
1/13/2006 c1 13wildchild33
let me put this softly... it stinks... dont criticize my poetry or any one elses unless you fix your own
13wildchild33let me put this softly... it stinks... dont criticize my poetry or any one elses unless you fix your own
1/13/2006 c1 215Harleen Napier
I really like this. I like the flow. I like the sound. And I don't know if there's anyone, especially another woman, who can't relate to this.
215Harleen NapierI really like this. I like the flow. I like the sound. And I don't know if there's anyone, especially another woman, who can't relate to this.
1/13/2006 c1 5amberdowny
Egad, I hope this isn't the best of your ability. The rhymes...ugh. Don't take that the wrong way. :)
In response to a review you left me, I am definitely a female, but I'm not rich at all, and I didn't "decide" to be bisexual. You cannot "choose" your sexual orientation, unless you're lying. Just so you're clear.
5amberdownyEgad, I hope this isn't the best of your ability. The rhymes...ugh. Don't take that the wrong way. :)
In response to a review you left me, I am definitely a female, but I'm not rich at all, and I didn't "decide" to be bisexual. You cannot "choose" your sexual orientation, unless you're lying. Just so you're clear.
1/12/2006 c1 13Nicole Michele
I could be good but you forced the rhyme just let it flow.If you desperatly want to read somthing without BIU's read "This is Odd"
13Nicole MicheleI could be good but you forced the rhyme just let it flow.If you desperatly want to read somthing without BIU's read "This is Odd"