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2/3/2006 c1 36norg
you are a great witer and as always produce something spectacular! i like this line "Seventeen in nothing but her skin" i dont know why may be just because of the simplicity!
1/18/2006 c1 100Neteri Bennu
wow that was good!

keep it up please

Your friend and fellow writer, Neteri Bennu
1/13/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
this is so real. 'Like a child she pulls the sheets up past her head and hide in the warm placer her breath heating the space she holds' i love those lines.
1/13/2006 c1 6hear me smile
I like the humanity in it. We tend to label people who have eating disorders as monsters, insane, people who cannot be related to. But in reading this poem, I found myself relating to her very, very easily(though I am not Bulimic or Anorexic).
1/13/2006 c1 19toxic-noodle725
its very deep and emotional. well done neko!
1/13/2006 c1 a lonely september
somehow i dont believe there is nothing in this poem. it was so beautifully written. you're getting better & better.
1/13/2006 c1 not the only deleted account
Thats really good, I've never thought of it that way. I'm not Bulimic or anything though.

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