for needle tracks5/3/2009 c1 
145young and the reckless
ah, what is it with me and tragedy?
i think its a love/hate relationship.
but all i know is that you write
in gorgeous, fantastic ways
145young and the recklessah, what is it with me and tragedy?
i think its a love/hate relationship.
but all i know is that you write
in gorgeous, fantastic ways
1/14/2006 c1 hey maria
I like how you would use two lines that were almost the same, with one or two words changed. A great contrast.
I like how you would use two lines that were almost the same, with one or two words changed. A great contrast.
1/13/2006 c1 15butterfly-touch
This is beauiful. A lot of heart felt emotion. I love your poems. Write more!
15butterfly-touchThis is beauiful. A lot of heart felt emotion. I love your poems. Write more!
1/13/2006 c1 56from beneath the bell jar
I liked it - dark and cool. I like "broken laugher and her empty eyes" and "tattooing all her mistakes". Some cool lines - kudos.
56from beneath the bell jarI liked it - dark and cool. I like "broken laugher and her empty eyes" and "tattooing all her mistakes". Some cool lines - kudos.
1/13/2006 c1 72The-Original-Neko
i dont know if it the music i am listen to or how i feel at the moment but this poem hit me and i felt sad
72The-Original-Nekoi dont know if it the music i am listen to or how i feel at the moment but this poem hit me and i felt sad
1/13/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Excellent word choice and flow in this. The beat really progresses the words. Heartfelt and sad, but wonderfully written.
879Moondog DozierExcellent word choice and flow in this. The beat really progresses the words. Heartfelt and sad, but wonderfully written.