for Stalking Is Merely Watching NowaDays2/11/2006 c1 
237classic violet
I love the first bit especially and the last bit I adored.
It's such a pretty symbolic-like poem. Thank you for your reviews, btw. :)
237classic violetI love the first bit especially and the last bit I adored.
It's such a pretty symbolic-like poem. Thank you for your reviews, btw. :)
1/15/2006 c1 90poetic abortion
Aquified? (i don't know, my head hurts comprehending le brilliance)
i love the imagery, just the gritty realism it seems to evoke from my reverie. lovelovelovelove the title affectionatly. :) beautiful poem, i just can't get enough.
~* noelle
90poetic abortionAquified? (i don't know, my head hurts comprehending le brilliance)
i love the imagery, just the gritty realism it seems to evoke from my reverie. lovelovelovelove the title affectionatly. :) beautiful poem, i just can't get enough.
~* noelle
1/14/2006 c1 124in theory
Title; so true. Main body has strength, it won't be ignored. Every line spits. I like "tire hearts," the rubber toughness of that just brings about the strangest ideas.
Peace.
124in theoryTitle; so true. Main body has strength, it won't be ignored. Every line spits. I like "tire hearts," the rubber toughness of that just brings about the strangest ideas.
Peace.
1/13/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This dips into very graceful pools of word choice. " I wonder what-Your outline tastes-Like", a wonderful and intriguing image. Word placement and flow are excellent. Good write.
879Moondog DozierThis dips into very graceful pools of word choice. " I wonder what-Your outline tastes-Like", a wonderful and intriguing image. Word placement and flow are excellent. Good write.