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for Your Lies Like the Raging Sea

1/27/2006 c1 51Kusje
thanks for reviewing my poem. you have something great here as well. i like the flow && words used. and also, your pattern. it flows greatly. and i too, can relate to it.

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good job.
1/17/2006 c1 2Queen of Boredom
That was awesome. Enchanting. I could just envision, not you drowning in the sea but the sea of lies. That was good. Really good.
1/14/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
You have a good metaphor in this. I like how you compared the multiple lies as a sea you can drown in.

thank you for your kind reviews :)

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