for Piece of a Dream3/30/2006 c1 
12Draketeeth
Wow that's cool. I love the imagery you used. "And a voice that tasted/ like cocoa (but it wasn’t/ bitter ‘til the end.)" Wonderful lines.
12DraketeethWow that's cool. I love the imagery you used. "And a voice that tasted/ like cocoa (but it wasn’t/ bitter ‘til the end.)" Wonderful lines.
1/25/2006 c1 57empathic life
Only one review? You've been ripped off, m'dear. I love it. The unbalanced rhythym emphasized the beauty. I see it as darkly passionate. I can't quite figure out what it is the dream's about though. Little bit confusing. But good, very good. The line "glittered like crushed/ pearls on black velvet" was brilliant. I compliment you again on your imagery. "Cut glass silver sliver/ of imagination gone awry" is probably my favourite line, though, if only because I feel as though I can relate.
57empathic lifeOnly one review? You've been ripped off, m'dear. I love it. The unbalanced rhythym emphasized the beauty. I see it as darkly passionate. I can't quite figure out what it is the dream's about though. Little bit confusing. But good, very good. The line "glittered like crushed/ pearls on black velvet" was brilliant. I compliment you again on your imagery. "Cut glass silver sliver/ of imagination gone awry" is probably my favourite line, though, if only because I feel as though I can relate.
1/15/2006 c1 25cornered.sensations
It's not random at all, it all fits perfectly, I loved the words you used. Keep writing!
25cornered.sensationsIt's not random at all, it all fits perfectly, I loved the words you used. Keep writing!