for where has your heartbeat gone?7/26/2007 c1 
12Ainu
So sad. T_T I think poems that people can relate to are the strongest kind, no matter the poem itself. Awesome writing.
12AinuSo sad. T_T I think poems that people can relate to are the strongest kind, no matter the poem itself. Awesome writing.
1/14/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
it wasn't anything particularly thought provoking or bursting with imagery, but there's something about that poem that slips into the reader's mind and make them feel awfully sad.
keep writing
s2 c
144chaos called creationit wasn't anything particularly thought provoking or bursting with imagery, but there's something about that poem that slips into the reader's mind and make them feel awfully sad.
keep writing
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1/14/2006 c1 68Neverlander12
Well, it fits perfectly. It's beautiful and haunting and captures the emotions after the passion in them dies down. And thanks for the review!
Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig
68Neverlander12Well, it fits perfectly. It's beautiful and haunting and captures the emotions after the passion in them dies down. And thanks for the review!
Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig
1/14/2006 c1 92randompoetry
Wow, after I read this I just got a chill. This is so sad, and written just right. I loved it.
92randompoetryWow, after I read this I just got a chill. This is so sad, and written just right. I loved it.
1/14/2006 c1 a lonely september
'Singing lullabies in the darkso you won't see my tears' this was beautiful. the title really suits it, since a child hears their mothers heartbeat the most... & it's comforting to them.
'Singing lullabies in the darkso you won't see my tears' this was beautiful. the title really suits it, since a child hears their mothers heartbeat the most... & it's comforting to them.