for burning the garden of eden3/3/2010 c1 iuiuhuyf
I liked this a lot. It was cute. no love should be considered wrong
I liked this a lot. It was cute. no love should be considered wrong
5/18/2008 c1 Loo
“I’d give up eternity for you”
I cried. I just fuckin' cried. I never cry!
Yeah, a life of happiness is much better than an eternity made of liars.
That was just beautiful.
“I’d give up eternity for you”
I cried. I just fuckin' cried. I never cry!
Yeah, a life of happiness is much better than an eternity made of liars.
That was just beautiful.
3/16/2008 c1 
47Helizabeth
i liked it! i don't think it's too corny! and i get the message, not paying that much attention to who's saying what. well written.
47Helizabethi liked it! i don't think it's too corny! and i get the message, not paying that much attention to who's saying what. well written.
6/25/2007 c1 acduetry
This was just perfect. I think you made your point beautifully and wrote one of those stories that stays with the reader and pops up at random moments throughout their day making them sigh and smile at nothing. I completely adore this!
This was just perfect. I think you made your point beautifully and wrote one of those stories that stays with the reader and pops up at random moments throughout their day making them sigh and smile at nothing. I completely adore this!
5/26/2007 c1 Berrigan
This is a beautiful story. I love your choice of words and the way they flow. I just want to read it over and over.
This is a beautiful story. I love your choice of words and the way they flow. I just want to read it over and over.
7/15/2006 c1 6the sacred night
This is almost like poetry, since it's more of a montage of images and emotions than a story. Not that that's a bad thing. It's cool how it's confusing but at the same time, in the end it makes perfect sense.
6the sacred nightThis is almost like poetry, since it's more of a montage of images and emotions than a story. Not that that's a bad thing. It's cool how it's confusing but at the same time, in the end it makes perfect sense.
6/6/2006 c1 tia-blue
don't worry it wasn't to corny. I loved it! and the last line is just so perfect!
don't worry it wasn't to corny. I loved it! and the last line is just so perfect!
6/4/2006 c1 4Lexy-Kun
It's so... so... amazing, wonderful, great... Oh my it's 3 in the morning, I'm a just a poor little french and I'm at a loss of word to describe it - but then I guess even if english was my mother language and it was 3 in the afternoon i wouldn't find the right words either.It feels so right, it makes me so happy that I... I just love it so much ! Why can't everyone see that ? Life would be so much easier if people could just stop being such heartless narrow-minded bastard and begin to realise that when two people truly love each other it's never wrong. They're all saying that love is the most beautiful thing in the world and then when you love someone of the same gender suddenly your love is dirty... I just can't understand this.Well... anyway, i'm just babling rather incoherently... I apologize !Just... thank you so much for this little story. It's really, really beautiful... (and it's not too corny for me. It's perfect !)
4Lexy-KunIt's so... so... amazing, wonderful, great... Oh my it's 3 in the morning, I'm a just a poor little french and I'm at a loss of word to describe it - but then I guess even if english was my mother language and it was 3 in the afternoon i wouldn't find the right words either.It feels so right, it makes me so happy that I... I just love it so much ! Why can't everyone see that ? Life would be so much easier if people could just stop being such heartless narrow-minded bastard and begin to realise that when two people truly love each other it's never wrong. They're all saying that love is the most beautiful thing in the world and then when you love someone of the same gender suddenly your love is dirty... I just can't understand this.Well... anyway, i'm just babling rather incoherently... I apologize !Just... thank you so much for this little story. It's really, really beautiful... (and it's not too corny for me. It's perfect !)
4/17/2006 c1 Kitsune Luver
Corny is good. I like corny. This was so sweet.
Corny is good. I like corny. This was so sweet.
2/18/2006 c1 4Beauty and Bleeding
The point. I didn't really worry about who said what. But I didn't get the point... Maybe it's 'cause I'm still a kid, maybe because I only got three hours of sleep last night and have been awake since 5, who knows. The point is(my point here, not the one of the story. Okay, I'll shut up now)I don't get the point. Hm... In a way that sounds kinda... well, like it doesn't make sense. Like an oxymoron, only not. As I said I'll shut up now.
4Beauty and BleedingThe point. I didn't really worry about who said what. But I didn't get the point... Maybe it's 'cause I'm still a kid, maybe because I only got three hours of sleep last night and have been awake since 5, who knows. The point is(my point here, not the one of the story. Okay, I'll shut up now)I don't get the point. Hm... In a way that sounds kinda... well, like it doesn't make sense. Like an oxymoron, only not. As I said I'll shut up now.
1/22/2006 c1 Joanne
well, i didn't think it was corny. actually, it really touched me. good job =)
well, i didn't think it was corny. actually, it really touched me. good job =)
1/20/2006 c1 10Finger Dingbat
sweet, and beautifully written, love the "silver cross" thing, and the "eden is burning" *giver you a corney smile and 2 thumbs up* lol, keep it up
10Finger Dingbatsweet, and beautifully written, love the "silver cross" thing, and the "eden is burning" *giver you a corney smile and 2 thumbs up* lol, keep it up