for The Smile, The Face of Love2/4/2006 c1 
6relletyrots
You know, when seeing a poem about love, I normally skip over it, because it's usually just another angsty reiteration of the thousands of previous emo poems about love, or broken love, or resplendent love, or unrequited love, or even lust. The list goes on...
But this one is different - it doesn't have the whole cliché lines like "getting lost in your eyes" or any of that sappy shit - but this different melodic flow to it. I like it. A lot.
6relletyrotsYou know, when seeing a poem about love, I normally skip over it, because it's usually just another angsty reiteration of the thousands of previous emo poems about love, or broken love, or resplendent love, or unrequited love, or even lust. The list goes on...
But this one is different - it doesn't have the whole cliché lines like "getting lost in your eyes" or any of that sappy shit - but this different melodic flow to it. I like it. A lot.
1/15/2006 c1 18deathbyeuphoria
I connected with the first half of this more than the second half but nevertheless this was nicely written.
18deathbyeuphoriaI connected with the first half of this more than the second half but nevertheless this was nicely written.