for Chamomile5/27/2006 c1 
9The Tragedy Divine
The diction, the repitition-it's all so lovely. I can't decide on my favorite aspect. You have a fan in me, my lady. :)
9The Tragedy DivineThe diction, the repitition-it's all so lovely. I can't decide on my favorite aspect. You have a fan in me, my lady. :)
4/24/2006 c1 1KyuubiANBU
realy good poem. the imagery sorta does flow in its own unique way. kinda like there's the picure of the flower underneath while the poem goes on. all in all, pretty good. keep on writing!~Peace
1KyuubiANBUrealy good poem. the imagery sorta does flow in its own unique way. kinda like there's the picure of the flower underneath while the poem goes on. all in all, pretty good. keep on writing!~Peace
3/16/2006 c1 41T. Rowland
this is very good... beautiful, gentle, moving, and intense wrapped around excellent word choice an a interesting approach and style. well done!
41T. Rowlandthis is very good... beautiful, gentle, moving, and intense wrapped around excellent word choice an a interesting approach and style. well done!
3/16/2006 c1 reedwrites
i like this one, it has a symbolic gust to it. And with what was said can also display the part of emotional feedback the writer portrays in oneself. very nice.
i like this one, it has a symbolic gust to it. And with what was said can also display the part of emotional feedback the writer portrays in oneself. very nice.
3/5/2006 c1 50Chandra-Moon
Fresh, interesting description from the viewpoint of...a flower! Different style. Good job.
50Chandra-MoonFresh, interesting description from the viewpoint of...a flower! Different style. Good job.
2/8/2006 c1 87R.J. Crosbie
very good. very descriptive. i loved the part about small children's toes and "crumbling between gypsy's fingers." keep writing!
87R.J. Crosbievery good. very descriptive. i loved the part about small children's toes and "crumbling between gypsy's fingers." keep writing!
2/6/2006 c1 829Anaare
A beautiful poem, one I enjoyed reading very much. Keep writing, as you're very good and thank you for the review!
829AnaareA beautiful poem, one I enjoyed reading very much. Keep writing, as you're very good and thank you for the review!
2/4/2006 c1 64Arwen Starfire
wowie, I love this poem! it is so pretty. and deep and realistic. it isn't one of those flowery poems that go on and on about the beauty but are totally superficial and unrealistic. You capture the beauty of the flower by showing its strength and trials. Love it! Write on!
64Arwen Starfirewowie, I love this poem! it is so pretty. and deep and realistic. it isn't one of those flowery poems that go on and on about the beauty but are totally superficial and unrealistic. You capture the beauty of the flower by showing its strength and trials. Love it! Write on!
2/3/2006 c1 24frayedlifeforce
it's so pretty! really well written, i liked this a lot, especially the imagery which you scattered throughout. well done, i really liked this. :) lionessrampant
24frayedlifeforceit's so pretty! really well written, i liked this a lot, especially the imagery which you scattered throughout. well done, i really liked this. :) lionessrampant
1/31/2006 c1 2callmebelle
Beautiful. It leaves me with this overwhelming feeling of sadness, but hope at the same time. All from describing a flower... sounds crazy, huh? Anyway, great work!
2callmebelleBeautiful. It leaves me with this overwhelming feeling of sadness, but hope at the same time. All from describing a flower... sounds crazy, huh? Anyway, great work!