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6/12/2006 c1 8Dragen Eyez
I hate quick edit too. It's such a drag. but you made the lines work just as well as extra spacing, I think. I hadn't thought of that, so kudos to you. Hmm... I almost wish there was someone to see the smiling after the old people leave. I think it would have been fitting since it's a new beginning, but then again poetry is quite subjective. This actually reminds me of when I left an old group of friends, or rather, they sort of left off... Anyway, enough pondering. Not bad over all!

PS Thanks for the review, much appreciated ^_^
1/15/2006 c1 72The-Original-Neko
i like it i dnt think you could really change it it really is fine as it is

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