for Autumn6/14/2006 c1 
14method acting
Interesting...professional. You weave your words easily. Wonderful imagery.
14method actingInteresting...professional. You weave your words easily. Wonderful imagery.
5/20/2006 c1 6Luneko
Wow. I was really surprised to discover I didn't review this the first time I read it. Maybe I was busy?
Well, this is an absolutely gorgeous piece. I love all the lush detail and evocative personification. Thank you.
6LunekoWow. I was really surprised to discover I didn't review this the first time I read it. Maybe I was busy?
Well, this is an absolutely gorgeous piece. I love all the lush detail and evocative personification. Thank you.
1/15/2006 c1 19J-Kid
H'mm. Not sure about this one. The story's okay, it's just that I was figuring that because the first verse was rhymned so well and had that sense of rhythm to it the rest of it would be the same kind of thing . . . and then not much of the rest of it rhymed except for one or two words here and there. :-(
Not that poetry has to be rhymed (most of mine aren't), but I feel this poem would have been better that way. Sorry. I do like the first verse though.
19J-KidH'mm. Not sure about this one. The story's okay, it's just that I was figuring that because the first verse was rhymned so well and had that sense of rhythm to it the rest of it would be the same kind of thing . . . and then not much of the rest of it rhymed except for one or two words here and there. :-(
Not that poetry has to be rhymed (most of mine aren't), but I feel this poem would have been better that way. Sorry. I do like the first verse though.