for Broken Love Story6/4/2011 c19 
17Ashley4287
sweet story. really realistic actually xD i felt everything the characters felt, it was written really well (or i'm just really a sensitive person but you get the point) :) this story is definitely going into my faves!
17Ashley4287sweet story. really realistic actually xD i felt everything the characters felt, it was written really well (or i'm just really a sensitive person but you get the point) :) this story is definitely going into my faves!
3/4/2011 c19 27Princess97
Heyy.. that was a great story! What year was it written in? It says 2006 in update, but I think I found this story in the recents a couple of months ago.
27Princess97Heyy.. that was a great story! What year was it written in? It says 2006 in update, but I think I found this story in the recents a couple of months ago.
3/12/2009 c19 5AshKing89
so i just read ur story and its been on my favs list for a while til i had time to put aside to give it its due. a couple of spelling errors and some parts that seems confusing becuase of it. overall i loved the plot. im actually working on a story similar that had me thinking more indepth to your story. but anyways i really enjoyed it.
5AshKing89so i just read ur story and its been on my favs list for a while til i had time to put aside to give it its due. a couple of spelling errors and some parts that seems confusing becuase of it. overall i loved the plot. im actually working on a story similar that had me thinking more indepth to your story. but anyways i really enjoyed it.
2/2/2008 c19 Laney
Fantastic story! I liked everything about it, for example how the name of the chapter came up in the last sentence and gave it some sort of closure.
Fantastic story! I liked everything about it, for example how the name of the chapter came up in the last sentence and gave it some sort of closure.
2/2/2008 c7 LoneRanger
I like the story and even though I sometimes can get a bit uncomfortable I think it's a really good story. Like the end of this chapter, I got pretty shaky when I read this and a few tears escaped for Helena's pain. But I will continue to read and see how it will all end.
I like the story and even though I sometimes can get a bit uncomfortable I think it's a really good story. Like the end of this chapter, I got pretty shaky when I read this and a few tears escaped for Helena's pain. But I will continue to read and see how it will all end.
8/19/2007 c19 iheartcarebears
I absolutely love ur story first of all it was very well written second I loved the charachers anyway I saw ur profile u write alot! anyway good luck with ur other stories. I just wanted to tell you I really liked this one.
I absolutely love ur story first of all it was very well written second I loved the charachers anyway I saw ur profile u write alot! anyway good luck with ur other stories. I just wanted to tell you I really liked this one.
6/29/2007 c19 8kittymobile
wow. amazing story. stroke of geniouses running all the way through it.
i want to genuinely thank you for writing something so inspiring. it was a brilliant read and...keep writing =)
you should try and get your stuff published.
8kittymobilewow. amazing story. stroke of geniouses running all the way through it.
i want to genuinely thank you for writing something so inspiring. it was a brilliant read and...keep writing =)
you should try and get your stuff published.
3/5/2007 c19 2cocoartist
I *just* read the whole of Broken Love Story in a oner (no homework done tonight, but what's new) and just wanted to say I really liked it. There could be a little bit more character development but basically it's really good. Nice one, and much respect to you for finishing it!
2cocoartistI *just* read the whole of Broken Love Story in a oner (no homework done tonight, but what's new) and just wanted to say I really liked it. There could be a little bit more character development but basically it's really good. Nice one, and much respect to you for finishing it!
10/31/2006 c19 Strangely Natural
Positively wonderful, exactly like you so eloquently stated: This is how it should be, things working out, taken day by day minute by minute. Big APPLAUSE!
Positively wonderful, exactly like you so eloquently stated: This is how it should be, things working out, taken day by day minute by minute. Big APPLAUSE!
8/13/2006 c19 7midnightdream-5
omg *cries* its over! gr8 ending i cudnt have done it ne better myself! it fitted the characters and story perfectly so a HUGE well done! lol :D cant wait to read ur new story! (i will get round to it i promise!) lol :D
kat x
7midnightdream-5omg *cries* its over! gr8 ending i cudnt have done it ne better myself! it fitted the characters and story perfectly so a HUGE well done! lol :D cant wait to read ur new story! (i will get round to it i promise!) lol :D
kat x
8/12/2006 c19 Sam
AWW..its done! omg ..i cant believe it's done..lol..i absolutely loved it..you are an amazing writer and i can't wait to read other stories written by you..keep up the amazing work! byee!
AWW..its done! omg ..i cant believe it's done..lol..i absolutely loved it..you are an amazing writer and i can't wait to read other stories written by you..keep up the amazing work! byee!
8/12/2006 c19 1hells666angel
o go you *whoop*
lol it was good..touching but correct. i liked it and will mioss all of the charecters specialy hell lol ]kk so update ur new one!
Rachel xx
1hells666angelo go you *whoop*
lol it was good..touching but correct. i liked it and will mioss all of the charecters specialy hell lol ]kk so update ur new one!
Rachel xx