for November In The City1/16/2006 c1 
16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Awe, this was sweet! I love the flow and wordings! So sincere and yet high in it's poignancy. After I read the last word, this piece left quite an impression on me. Good job!
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionAwe, this was sweet! I love the flow and wordings! So sincere and yet high in it's poignancy. After I read the last word, this piece left quite an impression on me. Good job!
1/15/2006 c1 crazy dog events
I liked this. The opening was nicely done. It could use some work in the middle, but the ending was beautiful. There's something wonderful in the simplicity of it.
Keep it up.
I liked this. The opening was nicely done. It could use some work in the middle, but the ending was beautiful. There's something wonderful in the simplicity of it.
Keep it up.