for Your Lips1/16/2006 c1 
2Def.inishun Uv Createeve
your second line doestn't have the correct amount of syllables. the first one has 5, the second one has 6, and the third has 5. pretty good, only the second line is... wrong? i can't find another word right now... x[
2Def.inishun Uv Createeveyour second line doestn't have the correct amount of syllables. the first one has 5, the second one has 6, and the third has 5. pretty good, only the second line is... wrong? i can't find another word right now... x[
1/16/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Powerful and passionate - I love the ach that you present in this. Wonderful work.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietPowerful and passionate - I love the ach that you present in this. Wonderful work.
Juliet.