for round and round in a circle1/25/2006 c1 
10Johana
Very true points here. I particularly hate it when people begin "caPITaliZIng lEtTers in [their] / SENTenCes fOr NO rEal reASOn". It's so annoying and distracting. I hate seeing these damn tweens doing that in their blogs. I see it and I react like "Dear God! Why bother wasting your time with these random CAPS?"
Meh, but whatever.
I found this piece amusing none-the-less. Thanks
10JohanaVery true points here. I particularly hate it when people begin "caPITaliZIng lEtTers in [their] / SENTenCes fOr NO rEal reASOn". It's so annoying and distracting. I hate seeing these damn tweens doing that in their blogs. I see it and I react like "Dear God! Why bother wasting your time with these random CAPS?"
Meh, but whatever.
I found this piece amusing none-the-less. Thanks
1/22/2006 c1 14kit feral
Kay, first I'm going to review this because I hate using reviews as a discussion. I know what you mean about that.
I liked this. It's better than your other stuff where you forced the rhymes and were generally just responding to your critics- this sounds more natural. It's good. I liked the line "oh, sorry if i offend you. i don't usually cuss." The anger is clear. "(to the contrary, i'm quite rebellious,spiky bracelets and all)" Very nice line. I also liked the "I'M REALLY REALLY MAD" part. Made me laugh. I also really liked the "caPITaliZIng lEtTers in My SENTenCes fOr NO rEal reASOn" part. I like your sense of humor, it really had me in stiches by the end. " you're just being confusing while sounding somewhat philosophical, you can come off as profound." Excellent. And awesome ending, too. A poem is a poem if the poet says it is, I agree.
Now. On to other things. I am actually aware of that and as I said (and as she said) her responces were immature. Just like yours were insensitive. She does have low self-esteem, I know. That's why it's hard for her to take flames. And I guess I just think that after she went so crazy after the first one it would have been better for you to just lay off. What's wrong with her? I don't know. She's depressed, obviously. And she is seeing a therapist, as far as I know. But there's only so much professionals can do if you're not helping yourself.
As far as I know this is over but I still wanted to thank you for stopping it. Sorry this happened, it was quite a silly little drama, wasn't it? And this is the last you'll hear of me. I just didn't want your reply to go unanswered.
And thank you for you review. :) Keep writing!
(See? I'm not normally a bitch. Just like she isn't normally so immature and you aren't probably normally so rude.)
14kit feralKay, first I'm going to review this because I hate using reviews as a discussion. I know what you mean about that.
I liked this. It's better than your other stuff where you forced the rhymes and were generally just responding to your critics- this sounds more natural. It's good. I liked the line "oh, sorry if i offend you. i don't usually cuss." The anger is clear. "(to the contrary, i'm quite rebellious,spiky bracelets and all)" Very nice line. I also liked the "I'M REALLY REALLY MAD" part. Made me laugh. I also really liked the "caPITaliZIng lEtTers in My SENTenCes fOr NO rEal reASOn" part. I like your sense of humor, it really had me in stiches by the end. " you're just being confusing while sounding somewhat philosophical, you can come off as profound." Excellent. And awesome ending, too. A poem is a poem if the poet says it is, I agree.
Now. On to other things. I am actually aware of that and as I said (and as she said) her responces were immature. Just like yours were insensitive. She does have low self-esteem, I know. That's why it's hard for her to take flames. And I guess I just think that after she went so crazy after the first one it would have been better for you to just lay off. What's wrong with her? I don't know. She's depressed, obviously. And she is seeing a therapist, as far as I know. But there's only so much professionals can do if you're not helping yourself.
As far as I know this is over but I still wanted to thank you for stopping it. Sorry this happened, it was quite a silly little drama, wasn't it? And this is the last you'll hear of me. I just didn't want your reply to go unanswered.
And thank you for you review. :) Keep writing!
(See? I'm not normally a bitch. Just like she isn't normally so immature and you aren't probably normally so rude.)
1/18/2006 c1 hey maria
"(to the contrary, i'm quite rebellious,/spiky bracelets and all)"
Nice.
I liked this. It was sarcastic without being too obvious.
Sid Vicious is in NO WAY comparable to Avril I-can't-spell-her-last-name. He's from a British punk band called the Sex Pistols. From the 70's. He practically killed the band and he could barely play bass, but he was a sex god. May he rest in peace.
"(to the contrary, i'm quite rebellious,/spiky bracelets and all)"
Nice.
I liked this. It was sarcastic without being too obvious.
Sid Vicious is in NO WAY comparable to Avril I-can't-spell-her-last-name. He's from a British punk band called the Sex Pistols. From the 70's. He practically killed the band and he could barely play bass, but he was a sex god. May he rest in peace.
1/18/2006 c1 55blackpowderchick
Ok so just in case you really don't know anything about poetry, which im assuming you dont because this "poem" is prose cut off at the knees, the reason my poem rhymed is because it was a sonnet. Each line has only 10 syllables, going in the pattern of unstressed STRESSED unstressed STRESSED. have i lost you yet? then you also have to have the correct rhyming pattern, which for a shakespearean sonnet is something along the lines of ABABCDCDEFEFGG; but i could have made it an italian sonnet... going ABBACDDCEFGEFG. confused? :D wanna know more? email me! I would love to help you with your "style". That is if you want help. ~mik
55blackpowderchickOk so just in case you really don't know anything about poetry, which im assuming you dont because this "poem" is prose cut off at the knees, the reason my poem rhymed is because it was a sonnet. Each line has only 10 syllables, going in the pattern of unstressed STRESSED unstressed STRESSED. have i lost you yet? then you also have to have the correct rhyming pattern, which for a shakespearean sonnet is something along the lines of ABABCDCDEFEFGG; but i could have made it an italian sonnet... going ABBACDDCEFGEFG. confused? :D wanna know more? email me! I would love to help you with your "style". That is if you want help. ~mik
1/17/2006 c1 90poetic abortion
amazing, truely. your work always has this witty sarcasm that i love & that i find funny. lovely poem.
~* noelle
90poetic abortionamazing, truely. your work always has this witty sarcasm that i love & that i find funny. lovely poem.
~* noelle
1/17/2006 c1 13wildchild33
finaly a poem from you that is not worse than a vogons... keep improving! good luck
13wildchild33finaly a poem from you that is not worse than a vogons... keep improving! good luck
1/16/2006 c1 215t3h Butterzfly of Nothing
hey, nothin' wrong with that. I call my shit poetry when all it is is words strung together to form a point. define "poetry" and you'll find your free as a bird. Love the poem, darlin'...
215t3h Butterzfly of Nothinghey, nothin' wrong with that. I call my shit poetry when all it is is words strung together to form a point. define "poetry" and you'll find your free as a bird. Love the poem, darlin'...
1/16/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
hm... i guess its alrite to express ur anger~ i mean, wat do write for if not to express ur feelings? good work overall~ i really felt the emotions come across strongly~
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorohm... i guess its alrite to express ur anger~ i mean, wat do write for if not to express ur feelings? good work overall~ i really felt the emotions come across strongly~
keep writing!