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3/7/2006 c1 Anime Freakizoid
hey, i'm finally reviewing!^_^ sorry it took so long, homework was keeping me hostage...*whew* but anyway, this is SO true man! This has been my basic opinion everyday for 4 years and I HATE it how time simply won't slow down during the good days just to be nice! hope to talk to you soon, another Dark Blind Ice profile has been uploaded! Enjoy your week!~Anime Freakizoid X^_^X
2/26/2006 c1 1Liquid Ice Maiden
this poem reall made me think..i LOVE how you said lines like A holocaust is remembered

And forgotten

it just makes you feel like everything is flying by
2/11/2006 c1 22Loki Mischeif-Maker
Hey!

I like this poem, too. It has some really nice, vivid imagery in it, after all.

Since I'm no poet, I fear I cannot comment, more, but I did enjoy it!

Cheers!

PS: Thank you for reviewing Sir Mordred. I'm sorry it took me so long to return the favor.
2/4/2006 c1 3Adaku
I love this poem. I should read more poems about life, they're probably good as this one. ^_^
1/30/2006 c1 28Losuai
Lovely poem. For some reason I wanted to go 'awe' in the end but ignore my comment. I'm weird. I like how it talks about the wars, fashion, celebrity and etc. I especially like 'Ages and memories pass, so do the clouds in the sky.' It is the comparing that gets me. Keep writing!
1/22/2006 c1 The Full Neko Alchemist
Awesome poem. I liked the allusion to time, which was finalised in the last line.

Thanks for reviewing. Due to your review, I'd decided to take the other fictions down and to upload the main story itself. Thanks again. ^^
1/16/2006 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Nice, I like the whole feel of this piece. And ultimately, it is the truth to things. Good job.
1/16/2006 c1 12NeoMiniTails
Very Good poem! I like it especially the last two lines

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