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5/31/2006 c1 74Grains and Oats
This is powerful. It sounds like something the world should recite (or sing if it's a song). This really sank in... I'm going to leave and ponder it. Thank you for the review(s).
2/2/2006 c1 16Greenwitch
Neato! The rhyme took me by surprise, I like it. Is this a song? I can almost hear it with a tune...
1/27/2006 c1 Needa S
Beautiful, super write. Keep'em coming.
1/26/2006 c1 50Jodie Sinclair
i really like this its cool. thanks for the reivew!
1/22/2006 c1 418Amethyst Horizon
i love this poem. i love the idea and everything. good work!
1/19/2006 c1 michaelralph
Your words are haunting and the last verse fits in perfect like a piece of jigsaw in your puzzle of poetry. Congratulations on your book publishing. You've achieved what most of us here wish to accomplish.
1/17/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The voice in this really comes across well. Innocence is a difficult concept to express, but you've done well here.

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