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4/8/2006 c1 the-narration
beauty, plain and simple.the only way to speak the truth is in works like these. nice job.
4/2/2006 c1 182SweetWithUncertainty
I loved this poem, simple, tragic, beautiful. made me sigh...*sigh*

Jaded,SG

~Love is when you don't want to go to bed because reality is better than some dream... ~
2/13/2006 c1 75Carp
Whoa. Powerful poem. I had to re-read it to let it sink in (sorry it's been an incredibly long day), but wow. Thanks so much for reviewing my work. :) Keep up the fabulous writing with your pieces, ok? I like them a lot.
2/9/2006 c1 104FunkyFlower
pretty cool. i like the flow in this and the wording is beautiful. keep writing,

~mez~
2/4/2006 c1 Yuri Kiryu
This is very nice. It makes me think of some things. It's nice thanks for the review.
1/30/2006 c1 21Send me to the mooN
Toughen up, have a little faithAnd maybe it’s a rainy day

i love that line. keep writing :)
1/28/2006 c1 51tdawgcars
Very true poem, and well written. Nice job.

Brandon
1/22/2006 c1 237classic violet
This was great. I loved the last two lines.
1/21/2006 c1 Needa S
Heartfelt piece. Awesome job putting it together.
1/21/2006 c1 4Driven-x
wow, very very deep.. a classic sad story. wow.
1/20/2006 c1 49shinku-kitsune
How sad...very few poems are truly tragic when they are labeled "tragedy", but I could nearly cry with all presented here.
1/19/2006 c1 12The Smoke
Very well written, flows well, and a great ending. Well done.
1/19/2006 c1 8Razorxcutxslut
Thanks...

You;re an incredible writer! Congrats on getting your book publish! I'm lokking forward on getting a copy!
1/17/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Interesting write. This stops and starts well. "Don't watch down that road-For things that can't come back", really captures the point well. Good work.

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