for The Dust in Your Eyes4/8/2006 c1 the-narration
beauty, plain and simple.the only way to speak the truth is in works like these. nice job.
beauty, plain and simple.the only way to speak the truth is in works like these. nice job.
4/2/2006 c1 
182SweetWithUncertainty
I loved this poem, simple, tragic, beautiful. made me sigh...*sigh*
Jaded,SG
~Love is when you don't want to go to bed because reality is better than some dream... ~
182SweetWithUncertaintyI loved this poem, simple, tragic, beautiful. made me sigh...*sigh*
Jaded,SG
~Love is when you don't want to go to bed because reality is better than some dream... ~
2/13/2006 c1 75Carp
Whoa. Powerful poem. I had to re-read it to let it sink in (sorry it's been an incredibly long day), but wow. Thanks so much for reviewing my work. :) Keep up the fabulous writing with your pieces, ok? I like them a lot.
75CarpWhoa. Powerful poem. I had to re-read it to let it sink in (sorry it's been an incredibly long day), but wow. Thanks so much for reviewing my work. :) Keep up the fabulous writing with your pieces, ok? I like them a lot.
2/9/2006 c1 104FunkyFlower
pretty cool. i like the flow in this and the wording is beautiful. keep writing,
~mez~
104FunkyFlowerpretty cool. i like the flow in this and the wording is beautiful. keep writing,
~mez~
2/4/2006 c1 Yuri Kiryu
This is very nice. It makes me think of some things. It's nice thanks for the review.
This is very nice. It makes me think of some things. It's nice thanks for the review.
1/30/2006 c1 21Send me to the mooN
Toughen up, have a little faithAnd maybe it’s a rainy day
i love that line. keep writing :)
21Send me to the mooNToughen up, have a little faithAnd maybe it’s a rainy day
i love that line. keep writing :)
1/20/2006 c1 49shinku-kitsune
How sad...very few poems are truly tragic when they are labeled "tragedy", but I could nearly cry with all presented here.
49shinku-kitsuneHow sad...very few poems are truly tragic when they are labeled "tragedy", but I could nearly cry with all presented here.
1/19/2006 c1 8Razorxcutxslut
Thanks...
You;re an incredible writer! Congrats on getting your book publish! I'm lokking forward on getting a copy!
8RazorxcutxslutThanks...
You;re an incredible writer! Congrats on getting your book publish! I'm lokking forward on getting a copy!
1/17/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Interesting write. This stops and starts well. "Don't watch down that road-For things that can't come back", really captures the point well. Good work.
879Moondog DozierInteresting write. This stops and starts well. "Don't watch down that road-For things that can't come back", really captures the point well. Good work.