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1/17/2006 c1 100B. L. Powell
This piece reminds me of my early years of high school except replace every female reference to a male one... And trust me, i wasn't after any hockey players. Anyways, it's moving and very frank. if i may be so bold though, being yourself comes before any of that
1/17/2006 c1 12The Smoke
I really liked this poem...it flowed very nicely and there was a good use of ryhming. I think youve captured the thoughts of a lot of people in highschool pretty well.
1/17/2006 c1 169Creepshow
1. hockey players' attention is a goal that makes me wonder if I know you at all2. I used to be a jock, you're still first string3. someone loves you more than you can mention, and a good portion of that is straight up sexual attraction

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