for I Can Fly!11/4/2007 c1 
37Teperehmi
"But I don’t feel a thing.
I haven’t felt a thing,
Since I got these wings."
Those three lines just didn't flow quite as well as the rest of the poem. However, I did indeed like it. It has a nice rhythm to it. Nice job. Anyway, I finally finished Revolutionary Dream if you're interested in seeing how it ended. Keep up the good work!
37Teperehmi"But I don’t feel a thing.
I haven’t felt a thing,
Since I got these wings."
Those three lines just didn't flow quite as well as the rest of the poem. However, I did indeed like it. It has a nice rhythm to it. Nice job. Anyway, I finally finished Revolutionary Dream if you're interested in seeing how it ended. Keep up the good work!