
7/3/2006 c16
1Aruru
Lmao. Hey Chris from Baskin Robbins. OMGz I just died laughing, even though this was supposed to be a somewhat sad as chapter.

Lmao. Hey Chris from Baskin Robbins. OMGz I just died laughing, even though this was supposed to be a somewhat sad as chapter.
7/3/2006 c16
1blazing aura
OMG...I'm gonna kill Ace (if he was alive gosh darnit). And Andrew...how can he NOT mean a kiss? GAH. I'm getting into this story. Keep it up chicka. Luv you!

OMG...I'm gonna kill Ace (if he was alive gosh darnit). And Andrew...how can he NOT mean a kiss? GAH. I'm getting into this story. Keep it up chicka. Luv you!
7/2/2006 c16 Nith
Okay now Ace does not deserve to have a hot picture. I rest my case :-)
Okay now Ace does not deserve to have a hot picture. I rest my case :-)
7/2/2006 c16 cassy
aw, im going to cry. It was great, but i feel bad for likeing it even tho the characer is so sad...but it rocks.
aw, im going to cry. It was great, but i feel bad for likeing it even tho the characer is so sad...but it rocks.
7/2/2006 c16
3readingismything
hey Ace is an ass...well doesn't his name shows that? hmph. plese put on a long chapter next time this was so short. and just for advice you could describe the kiss more beacause i would love to have details and this wasn't enough it ended quickly. neways keep up the gd work and update soon!

hey Ace is an ass...well doesn't his name shows that? hmph. plese put on a long chapter next time this was so short. and just for advice you could describe the kiss more beacause i would love to have details and this wasn't enough it ended quickly. neways keep up the gd work and update soon!
7/1/2006 c16 Emily
Tender crisp sandwich..nice.
I love this chapter, I think it's my faovirte.
Tender crisp sandwich..nice.
I love this chapter, I think it's my faovirte.
7/1/2006 c16
4Liz Inc
Aw. :( Poor Delilah. Then again...in a way, I agree that Andrew shouldn't have done what he did. She was in a unstable state of mind. He should have waited. But regardless, I hope things get better for the two of them.
And I'm so glad she finally kicked Derek where the sun don't shine. I was so waiting for it. Lolz.
I love the random thoughts and stuff that are thrown into the story here and there. It's really entertaining. Makes Delilah seem more real and imperfect.
Oh...and one other thing. I was kinda hesitant to see the pics you posted of your characters because the last time i checked out character photos for a story, i saw pics of people like Hiliary Duff, Aaron Carter, and Jessie McCartney. O_o Yeah, so I got scared before looking at yours. Ha, ha. But, glad to see that you did not decide to just post random pics of crappy celebrities. Lolz.
Are those actual people you know? Or did you just find all those pics...somwhere. O_o Just curious...^_^ The second one of Andrew is really hot. XD
Anyhoo...this is good. Keep up the awesome writing! I love your style!

Aw. :( Poor Delilah. Then again...in a way, I agree that Andrew shouldn't have done what he did. She was in a unstable state of mind. He should have waited. But regardless, I hope things get better for the two of them.
And I'm so glad she finally kicked Derek where the sun don't shine. I was so waiting for it. Lolz.
I love the random thoughts and stuff that are thrown into the story here and there. It's really entertaining. Makes Delilah seem more real and imperfect.
Oh...and one other thing. I was kinda hesitant to see the pics you posted of your characters because the last time i checked out character photos for a story, i saw pics of people like Hiliary Duff, Aaron Carter, and Jessie McCartney. O_o Yeah, so I got scared before looking at yours. Ha, ha. But, glad to see that you did not decide to just post random pics of crappy celebrities. Lolz.
Are those actual people you know? Or did you just find all those pics...somwhere. O_o Just curious...^_^ The second one of Andrew is really hot. XD
Anyhoo...this is good. Keep up the awesome writing! I love your style!
6/30/2006 c16
19Olivine
never heard that song. well, its funny, anyways, lol. not the fact that her lifes sorta down at the moment, but Hey Chris from Baskin Robins. you get what i mean. so, yeah, wonder what zactly (im three again) went through andrew's head, there... sorry, gotsa cut this short, because my fingers hurt from the massize amount of reviewing and typing i did in the first three days of summer vacation. figures, right?
keep on writing ~~MWR-:|:-

never heard that song. well, its funny, anyways, lol. not the fact that her lifes sorta down at the moment, but Hey Chris from Baskin Robins. you get what i mean. so, yeah, wonder what zactly (im three again) went through andrew's head, there... sorry, gotsa cut this short, because my fingers hurt from the massize amount of reviewing and typing i did in the first three days of summer vacation. figures, right?
keep on writing ~~MWR-:|:-
6/30/2006 c16
1InverseEbony
I believe that this is the best story on FictionPress that I've read so far. I loved it and I can't wait for more. Thanks for the great read!

I believe that this is the best story on FictionPress that I've read so far. I loved it and I can't wait for more. Thanks for the great read!
6/29/2006 c16 icedfaerie
Aww poor Delilah! Ace is an ass! Someone should go beat him up. I can't wait until the next chapter.
Aww poor Delilah! Ace is an ass! Someone should go beat him up. I can't wait until the next chapter.
6/29/2006 c16 Noelle
Aw poor delilah. I hope things will get better for her!
Aw poor delilah. I hope things will get better for her!
6/29/2006 c16
2Broken Bright Eyes
Slow Down is such a great song, its my ringtone actually so is Hey There Delilah..Anyhoo Delilah's life is screwed up. I can't believe that Ace did that, total a-hole. I really want Andrew and her to get together. He(Andrew) should get his stuff together, he's a bit confusing...I mean he confuses me, imagine Delilah. Btw I did understand that whole first paragraph you wrote about the game and little kids...If that made any sense ^^

Slow Down is such a great song, its my ringtone actually so is Hey There Delilah..Anyhoo Delilah's life is screwed up. I can't believe that Ace did that, total a-hole. I really want Andrew and her to get together. He(Andrew) should get his stuff together, he's a bit confusing...I mean he confuses me, imagine Delilah. Btw I did understand that whole first paragraph you wrote about the game and little kids...If that made any sense ^^
6/28/2006 c16 Hana
Oh Mah GAHH kinda lost about everything... but it was a very interesting chapter, where do you come up with all this shtuff.?ahahahahhai like i like
Oh Mah GAHH kinda lost about everything... but it was a very interesting chapter, where do you come up with all this shtuff.?ahahahahhai like i like
6/28/2006 c16
8nostalgicEXPLOSION
What a sad sad chapter! Please continue writing more. I am in love with this story and Ace is such a butthead. Loved it.
-M

What a sad sad chapter! Please continue writing more. I am in love with this story and Ace is such a butthead. Loved it.
-M