for Mood Rings5/4/2006 c1 TheTrueBlue41728
Yay, I'm your fortieth review. Now you can update!
Okay, review on chapters eight and nine.
I feel so bad for Andrew! Although getting raped is pretty bad too..
The ninth chapter was lacking action until of course, the end. I mean, it did have action, but you know me.. I like my action. :-)
Yay, I'm your fortieth review. Now you can update!
Okay, review on chapters eight and nine.
I feel so bad for Andrew! Although getting raped is pretty bad too..
The ninth chapter was lacking action until of course, the end. I mean, it did have action, but you know me.. I like my action. :-)
5/4/2006 c1 s-t-i-n-a
hey! aghh, your story just stopped, it MUST continue, or i'll be haunted! please continue! aghok well yah, its so awesome, poor drew and yay, delilah is so confident and so and ect. yep...so continue, asap, or i'll keep commenting the same thing over and over and then you'll have OVER 40 comments and you'll be forced to update, m uhahhahahaha danielle, muhahahhaahaha!ok, love love love stina :)
hey! aghh, your story just stopped, it MUST continue, or i'll be haunted! please continue! aghok well yah, its so awesome, poor drew and yay, delilah is so confident and so and ect. yep...so continue, asap, or i'll keep commenting the same thing over and over and then you'll have OVER 40 comments and you'll be forced to update, m uhahhahahaha danielle, muhahahhaahaha!ok, love love love stina :)
5/3/2006 c9 
19Olivine
aww, poor andrew. -sniff sniff- i feel so bad for him. stupid james. did i mention i dont like him? of course i did. i hate james. get him out of the picture! im sure michalangelo doesnt like james either! (and whered michalangelo come from? ... well, picture.. i was thinking of a painting... im not funny, i know)
so, anyways, no spelling errors, no weird sentence structures, and detail was all good. so, yea. nice.
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
19Olivineaww, poor andrew. -sniff sniff- i feel so bad for him. stupid james. did i mention i dont like him? of course i did. i hate james. get him out of the picture! im sure michalangelo doesnt like james either! (and whered michalangelo come from? ... well, picture.. i was thinking of a painting... im not funny, i know)
so, anyways, no spelling errors, no weird sentence structures, and detail was all good. so, yea. nice.
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
5/3/2006 c9 18unthinkable
no. how could that happen? she can't pretend to like Derek. no no no. she tells Andrew what happened and he saves the day. poor girl. but anyways, it's your story and i like the way it's going so far. nice quick update, i like. update soon!
oh, i have a question. in the seventh paragraph from the end of the story, is it supposed to be Natalie or Delilah when Andrew says "why do you care if i go out with Natalie anyway. cuz, i'm not sure because of what he says before that sentence.
ok. done commenting. update soon.
18unthinkableno. how could that happen? she can't pretend to like Derek. no no no. she tells Andrew what happened and he saves the day. poor girl. but anyways, it's your story and i like the way it's going so far. nice quick update, i like. update soon!
oh, i have a question. in the seventh paragraph from the end of the story, is it supposed to be Natalie or Delilah when Andrew says "why do you care if i go out with Natalie anyway. cuz, i'm not sure because of what he says before that sentence.
ok. done commenting. update soon.
5/2/2006 c9 Slander By Osmosis
James is such a sweetheart. Del is actually a pretty strong character now that I think about it. Most people wouldn't be able to show their faces and go to school and not care like she did. And she took it all in stride - no doubt a somewhat delusional stride, but a stride all the same.
It sounds like Natalie is related to Derek, the way he's forcing Drew to date her. Ew. Del covers up so nicely. She's actually an honorable character for feeling so much for Drew.
Please update as soon as you may!
- Lithely
James is such a sweetheart. Del is actually a pretty strong character now that I think about it. Most people wouldn't be able to show their faces and go to school and not care like she did. And she took it all in stride - no doubt a somewhat delusional stride, but a stride all the same.
It sounds like Natalie is related to Derek, the way he's forcing Drew to date her. Ew. Del covers up so nicely. She's actually an honorable character for feeling so much for Drew.
Please update as soon as you may!
- Lithely
5/2/2006 c8 DarkZera
Okay, next time... NEVER EVER let me read your upcoming chapter, because then I won't have anything to do when I come home... ;_;
*scratches your neck*
Okay, next time... NEVER EVER let me read your upcoming chapter, because then I won't have anything to do when I come home... ;_;
*scratches your neck*
5/2/2006 c1 laurynbelle
Hi,
This is Kevin's sister... I just wanted to let you know, that your story is amazing. :DYeah. - Lauryn
Hi,
This is Kevin's sister... I just wanted to let you know, that your story is amazing. :DYeah. - Lauryn
5/2/2006 c8 19Olivine
oohh, i get the chapter title, NOW! heh, i glanes at it, and thought it said 'trix' as in the actual cereal... lol. but yea, anyways... if he was drunk, i dont get why she didnt just get up and walk away.
anyways... i dont like this guy, derek. i like andrew much better. even james much better. whys he even here, again? oh yea. suspense.
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
19Olivineoohh, i get the chapter title, NOW! heh, i glanes at it, and thought it said 'trix' as in the actual cereal... lol. but yea, anyways... if he was drunk, i dont get why she didnt just get up and walk away.
anyways... i dont like this guy, derek. i like andrew much better. even james much better. whys he even here, again? oh yea. suspense.
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
5/2/2006 c8 NateBran
This story is so good! But you can't just leave it like that... I almost hyperventilated. I can't wait for more, update soon!
This story is so good! But you can't just leave it like that... I almost hyperventilated. I can't wait for more, update soon!
5/1/2006 c8 Slander By Osmosis
Oh, so such a good chapter. I almost felt like crying when I read the last couple of sentences. Someone will come for Del though, right? Derek's such a jerk for "getting rid of" all those people. He should've just come out and said that he liked her if he really went through all that trouble... grumble.
James is the shiznit, and always will be. It'd be cool to have a best friend like him. ^^
Great chapter! Please update as soon as you may!
- Lithely
Oh, so such a good chapter. I almost felt like crying when I read the last couple of sentences. Someone will come for Del though, right? Derek's such a jerk for "getting rid of" all those people. He should've just come out and said that he liked her if he really went through all that trouble... grumble.
James is the shiznit, and always will be. It'd be cool to have a best friend like him. ^^
Great chapter! Please update as soon as you may!
- Lithely
5/1/2006 c1 DarkZera
HI, this guy, yes guy is reviewing your story, and yes... I did just make an account just to review it ;) aww how special of me? oh well... This story does strike an odd resemblance to oh average day people that live in this guy's world... I just don't know why... o,O how odd...
You didn't let me read ahead ;_: how mean of you!
*scratches your arm*
HI, this guy, yes guy is reviewing your story, and yes... I did just make an account just to review it ;) aww how special of me? oh well... This story does strike an odd resemblance to oh average day people that live in this guy's world... I just don't know why... o,O how odd...
You didn't let me read ahead ;_: how mean of you!
*scratches your arm*
5/1/2006 c7 19Olivine
aww... thats sad. but you updated the next day, after i reviewed, haha, thats awesome! :) uh, im in a weird mood... okay, so to find out whats going to happen next, you gotta update. and update fast. please and thankyou :)
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
19Olivineaww... thats sad. but you updated the next day, after i reviewed, haha, thats awesome! :) uh, im in a weird mood... okay, so to find out whats going to happen next, you gotta update. and update fast. please and thankyou :)
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
4/30/2006 c7 1Twinkle Star Bell
This story is so good. I can never tell what is going to happen next. Please update soon! This story rocks!
1Twinkle Star BellThis story is so good. I can never tell what is going to happen next. Please update soon! This story rocks!