for Mood Rings4/4/2007 c1 
8somuchformyhappyending
Okay, you think MY story was amazing? this is a great beginning. I absolutely LOVED how you started with the whole thing on mood rings because it made your character seem so real. and no, I'm not saying this because you send me a totally sweet review; I'm saying this because it's amazing how you took something so random and...well, random and turned it into something so...gah. I don't even know what I'm talking about. And the second reason why I liked this so much is because your characted IS me. No, seriously, this is me. well, the whole 't-shirt' wearing thing is me. I have a feeling the main character of my story and the main character of your story would be best friends. hmm...they really would. anyway, great start!
bec
8somuchformyhappyendingOkay, you think MY story was amazing? this is a great beginning. I absolutely LOVED how you started with the whole thing on mood rings because it made your character seem so real. and no, I'm not saying this because you send me a totally sweet review; I'm saying this because it's amazing how you took something so random and...well, random and turned it into something so...gah. I don't even know what I'm talking about. And the second reason why I liked this so much is because your characted IS me. No, seriously, this is me. well, the whole 't-shirt' wearing thing is me. I have a feeling the main character of my story and the main character of your story would be best friends. hmm...they really would. anyway, great start!
bec
3/23/2007 c1 Jess
This is a really awesome story!
And...I was wondering, where you got that picture of Ace from?
He is REALLY hot! :D
So yeah...^^
This is a really awesome story!
And...I was wondering, where you got that picture of Ace from?
He is REALLY hot! :D
So yeah...^^
3/20/2007 c23 SparklingStar25
So cute!Loved this.And a sequel sounds great but its just really sweet the way it is.
So cute!Loved this.And a sequel sounds great but its just really sweet the way it is.
3/5/2007 c23 Espeaje
Make that two people who spent their entire night reading this story. I love your use of conversation, like the character is really just talking to a friend in telling this story; it brings up some really good humor.
Make that two people who spent their entire night reading this story. I love your use of conversation, like the character is really just talking to a friend in telling this story; it brings up some really good humor.
3/2/2007 c23 19Olivine
Aww. A perfect ending to a perfect story. I love you for writing this story. And I love Andrew, too, he's such a cutie. Congratulations on finishing this story! I'm so proud to have been one of the first reviewers. I'm not so sure about a sequel with Hanna and her guy, though, just because it would mean we, the readers, would be expecting something as great as Delilah and Andrew, and I'm sorry to say that no two characters from the same original story could not deliver something like that. I think it'd be better if you created a whole new plot and chracters and stuff, but then that's me and my opinion.
Keep on writing -Greyhound.
PS- oh, yes, I'm Sapna Shanti in disguise.
19OlivineAww. A perfect ending to a perfect story. I love you for writing this story. And I love Andrew, too, he's such a cutie. Congratulations on finishing this story! I'm so proud to have been one of the first reviewers. I'm not so sure about a sequel with Hanna and her guy, though, just because it would mean we, the readers, would be expecting something as great as Delilah and Andrew, and I'm sorry to say that no two characters from the same original story could not deliver something like that. I think it'd be better if you created a whole new plot and chracters and stuff, but then that's me and my opinion.
Keep on writing -Greyhound.
PS- oh, yes, I'm Sapna Shanti in disguise.
2/27/2007 c1 1Phantasia.89
Aww, that was NOT a sorry excuse for the story. It was one of the best stories I've ever read. And so sweet! *sighs* I'm a sucker for happy endings...
Hope to read more of your work!
1Phantasia.89Aww, that was NOT a sorry excuse for the story. It was one of the best stories I've ever read. And so sweet! *sighs* I'm a sucker for happy endings...
Hope to read more of your work!
2/26/2007 c23 4Nyleve Nalloc
I wanted to say, I enjoyed this story and spent my entire night reading it. =)
4Nyleve NallocI wanted to say, I enjoyed this story and spent my entire night reading it. =)
2/22/2007 c23 92burning in effigy
i was just innocently scrolling through author's profiles and came upon this story and was violently pulled in. i admit that some parts of the story threw me off, but when it was good, it was ohmygoshawesome! good.
i would have added it to my favorites.. if only i had found it sooner. ANYWAYS.. i adore the characters you've created- they all seem so screwed up (some more than others) and normal like regular people
because i have a lot of time on my hands right now and i haven't reviewed before so i'm going into all the characters just to tell you why i like them (going by your character pictures list because there are too many of them for me to remember). heh :)
delilah:: very cute, loved her personality, a kind of messed up perkiness. by far one of the most real characters in here
andrew:: not my favorite character but he did win me over sometimes and he treated her right (better than all the other guys) i guess she was meant to be with him :)
hana and josh:: heh. those two names (and characters) are so cute together; do believe you kind of threw them out of the story sometimes, but then again, they probably didn't add to the story too much
james:: god. i don't care if he's gay. he's too cute. overgrown teddy bear!
natalie:: bitch. HA! ok..
ace:: hot asshole :-/ too hot for his own good, although he was really sweet... added so much drama, but drama makes the world go around :)
forest:: aww.. i actually liked him a lot, most definitely added to the story; cute but dangerous at the same time.. i mean HE TRIED TO KILL HIS SISTER? wow.
ok. i'm done :)
excellent story
92burning in effigyi was just innocently scrolling through author's profiles and came upon this story and was violently pulled in. i admit that some parts of the story threw me off, but when it was good, it was ohmygoshawesome! good.
i would have added it to my favorites.. if only i had found it sooner. ANYWAYS.. i adore the characters you've created- they all seem so screwed up (some more than others) and normal like regular people
because i have a lot of time on my hands right now and i haven't reviewed before so i'm going into all the characters just to tell you why i like them (going by your character pictures list because there are too many of them for me to remember). heh :)
delilah:: very cute, loved her personality, a kind of messed up perkiness. by far one of the most real characters in here
andrew:: not my favorite character but he did win me over sometimes and he treated her right (better than all the other guys) i guess she was meant to be with him :)
hana and josh:: heh. those two names (and characters) are so cute together; do believe you kind of threw them out of the story sometimes, but then again, they probably didn't add to the story too much
james:: god. i don't care if he's gay. he's too cute. overgrown teddy bear!
natalie:: bitch. HA! ok..
ace:: hot asshole :-/ too hot for his own good, although he was really sweet... added so much drama, but drama makes the world go around :)
forest:: aww.. i actually liked him a lot, most definitely added to the story; cute but dangerous at the same time.. i mean HE TRIED TO KILL HIS SISTER? wow.
ok. i'm done :)
excellent story
2/21/2007 c23 dawn's unforgiving darkness
i liike the last line
i liike the last line
2/21/2007 c23 10funsize
im not eating this bullshit. NO WAY IS THIS THE END! THIS IS THE WORST END I"VE EVER READ! THERE GAD SO BETTER BE AN EPILOGUE OR SOMETHING BETTER COZS THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY AND YOU'VE JUST LET IT DOWN COMPLETELY! ADD MORE COZ IM ALMOST IN TEARS THATS HOW UPSET I AM AT THIS ENDING! FIX IT NOW! now!
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I HOPE THIS HAS GOTTEN THE MESSAGE ACROSS TO U. I HOPE UR HAPPY, U MADE ME USE CAPITALS.
xx jez (i actually do love this story but the ending is a let down. sorry)
10funsizeim not eating this bullshit. NO WAY IS THIS THE END! THIS IS THE WORST END I"VE EVER READ! THERE GAD SO BETTER BE AN EPILOGUE OR SOMETHING BETTER COZS THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY AND YOU'VE JUST LET IT DOWN COMPLETELY! ADD MORE COZ IM ALMOST IN TEARS THATS HOW UPSET I AM AT THIS ENDING! FIX IT NOW! now!
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I HOPE THIS HAS GOTTEN THE MESSAGE ACROSS TO U. I HOPE UR HAPPY, U MADE ME USE CAPITALS.
xx jez (i actually do love this story but the ending is a let down. sorry)
2/20/2007 c23 3readingismything
well i m glad n a bit sad too dat its over...glad cuz dey gt 2geder finally...and the chapter was amazin and delilah deserved a happy endin. all d best for your other stories.
3readingismythingwell i m glad n a bit sad too dat its over...glad cuz dey gt 2geder finally...and the chapter was amazin and delilah deserved a happy endin. all d best for your other stories.
2/20/2007 c23 wandless
Ahh, I can't believe your story ended! I quite liked the intense make out scene at the end. I hope you continue to write, you are very talented!
Ahh, I can't believe your story ended! I quite liked the intense make out scene at the end. I hope you continue to write, you are very talented!