for Mood Rings4/30/2006 c7 Slander By Osmosis
Aw! Curse Andrew for being so cursable! Poor Del. Wait, we're not supposed to sympathize, right? That's what she said in the first chapter. Ah, I still feel horrible. Does that mean that Andrew sang "Come What May" to /Natalie/? Ew. Please make this all better by updating as soon as you may!
- Lithely
Aw! Curse Andrew for being so cursable! Poor Del. Wait, we're not supposed to sympathize, right? That's what she said in the first chapter. Ah, I still feel horrible. Does that mean that Andrew sang "Come What May" to /Natalie/? Ew. Please make this all better by updating as soon as you may!
- Lithely
4/30/2006 c6 
19Olivine
ooh... was that the last chapter? :( sadness. ah well, youre just gonna have to update really quickly. and i mean r.e.a.l.l.y. quickly. heh, poor drew. and delilah. lol... interesting chapter title, btw.
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
19Olivineooh... was that the last chapter? :( sadness. ah well, youre just gonna have to update really quickly. and i mean r.e.a.l.l.y. quickly. heh, poor drew. and delilah. lol... interesting chapter title, btw.
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
4/30/2006 c5 Olivine
"hey juliet, i think you'll find you really blow my mind. maybe someday, you an me can run away..." oh, thats an awesome song, lol.
no spelling mistakes, sentence strcuture, and all thats all in place... good, good. im trying to hurry this review up so i can get to the next chapter!
~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
"hey juliet, i think you'll find you really blow my mind. maybe someday, you an me can run away..." oh, thats an awesome song, lol.
no spelling mistakes, sentence strcuture, and all thats all in place... good, good. im trying to hurry this review up so i can get to the next chapter!
~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
4/30/2006 c3 Olivine
LOL that was HILARIOUS. im actually laughing so hard, im almost crying!... oh. em. gee. lol. i mean... usually when i see a 'romance/humor' genre thingy, its like all cheasy humor, like not actually funny. but this is hilarious! can you tell i like the story? :D
oh, wow. im really enjoying it. "Yes, i know im psychotic. first step is admitting it" lol. "i love my elbow. thank god it was made." lol, again. wow, now IM being psychotic.
anyways, i saw no speling errors, which is good. in a chapter like this, that wouldve ruined all the fun. no grammar or sentence structure weirdos, either. and detail... well, that was the best part, lol.
okay, okay, next chapter -almost clicks the next button before actually sending the review- woops. ^^;; ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
LOL that was HILARIOUS. im actually laughing so hard, im almost crying!... oh. em. gee. lol. i mean... usually when i see a 'romance/humor' genre thingy, its like all cheasy humor, like not actually funny. but this is hilarious! can you tell i like the story? :D
oh, wow. im really enjoying it. "Yes, i know im psychotic. first step is admitting it" lol. "i love my elbow. thank god it was made." lol, again. wow, now IM being psychotic.
anyways, i saw no speling errors, which is good. in a chapter like this, that wouldve ruined all the fun. no grammar or sentence structure weirdos, either. and detail... well, that was the best part, lol.
okay, okay, next chapter -almost clicks the next button before actually sending the review- woops. ^^;; ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
4/30/2006 c2 Olivine
hey, gilmore girls is awesome! :p lol, that actually made me laugh. so... 'tengo miedo, casa perro'? 'i have -, home dog'? i think. whats 'miedo'? anyways... thats a little off topic.
haha, yea, i like james. and andrew. thats probably only because he wanted to protect her at that one party. i dunno, but spelling was good. i didnt see any mistaes here, and sentence structure was good, and detail, too. awesome, awesome.
k, im gonna keep reading ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
hey, gilmore girls is awesome! :p lol, that actually made me laugh. so... 'tengo miedo, casa perro'? 'i have -, home dog'? i think. whats 'miedo'? anyways... thats a little off topic.
haha, yea, i like james. and andrew. thats probably only because he wanted to protect her at that one party. i dunno, but spelling was good. i didnt see any mistaes here, and sentence structure was good, and detail, too. awesome, awesome.
k, im gonna keep reading ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
4/30/2006 c1 Olivine
wow, i love her attitude. the whole 'randomness' i guess you could call it, while shes telling us the story. awesome, there. youre doing great portraying her attitude already int he first chapter. same with hana, and i dont know about andrew; all he did was give a thumbs up, smile, and shrug. lol. so, well see about that later. and james... so far, hes nice enough. black hair and blue eyes, huh? nice:)
youve had a few spelling errors, but so many. for example, in the last sentence "...presence would mean more the me then anything" im guessing you meant it to be "...presence would mean more (to) me (than) anything". right? grammar and sentence structure was all good, and detail was awesome.
this is really a good start to the story, and youve got me interested enough to read some more. so i will!
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
wow, i love her attitude. the whole 'randomness' i guess you could call it, while shes telling us the story. awesome, there. youre doing great portraying her attitude already int he first chapter. same with hana, and i dont know about andrew; all he did was give a thumbs up, smile, and shrug. lol. so, well see about that later. and james... so far, hes nice enough. black hair and blue eyes, huh? nice:)
youve had a few spelling errors, but so many. for example, in the last sentence "...presence would mean more the me then anything" im guessing you meant it to be "...presence would mean more (to) me (than) anything". right? grammar and sentence structure was all good, and detail was awesome.
this is really a good start to the story, and youve got me interested enough to read some more. so i will!
keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-:|:-
4/28/2006 c6 Slander By Osmosis
I'm wondering why this doesn't have more reviews... in other words, this is an awesome story! It's really cute and Del is positively wonderful. The beginning of this chapter was pure genius.
"'Hello,' I answered in this mock-sultry voice, 'You've reached Chastity's Stripper Hotline. Press 1 for some alone-'"
That made me laugh outloud, which is quite the accomplishment.
Really great! So, please update soon!
- Lithely
I'm wondering why this doesn't have more reviews... in other words, this is an awesome story! It's really cute and Del is positively wonderful. The beginning of this chapter was pure genius.
"'Hello,' I answered in this mock-sultry voice, 'You've reached Chastity's Stripper Hotline. Press 1 for some alone-'"
That made me laugh outloud, which is quite the accomplishment.
Really great! So, please update soon!
- Lithely
4/26/2006 c6 8brennadorko
Okay. That chapter is so like you. babbleing on and on... haha. but i loved it. I think i like this story more than those other ones we read. i forgot the name of it.. but the one with Oz and Stine and yeah... He Phunks Me Not? idk.but i fucking love your story de
8brennadorkoOkay. That chapter is so like you. babbleing on and on... haha. but i loved it. I think i like this story more than those other ones we read. i forgot the name of it.. but the one with Oz and Stine and yeah... He Phunks Me Not? idk.but i fucking love your story de
4/26/2006 c6 Hana from the story
bwahahahah i love this story so much you should seriously get it published you could become hecka rich ahahah..
bwahahahah i love this story so much you should seriously get it published you could become hecka rich ahahah..
4/13/2006 c4 8brennadorko
OMFG. DANIELLE. thats exactly what my gay guy friend does. but i don't know why. i don't even hang out with the guy i like. He pretty much ignores me. well, both of the guys i like pretty much ignore me. :(Moving on. Anways. Want to do something soon?
8brennadorkoOMFG. DANIELLE. thats exactly what my gay guy friend does. but i don't know why. i don't even hang out with the guy i like. He pretty much ignores me. well, both of the guys i like pretty much ignore me. :(Moving on. Anways. Want to do something soon?
4/8/2006 c3 15Weeping Duck
Chapter three is definitely my fave so far. All the "gangsta" stuff from Hana is good, and Josh's head-patting...yeah, that was a great moment. Delilah's little "happy freak outs," as I'm going to call them, whenever James is around are hilarious. Great chapter!
15Weeping DuckChapter three is definitely my fave so far. All the "gangsta" stuff from Hana is good, and Josh's head-patting...yeah, that was a great moment. Delilah's little "happy freak outs," as I'm going to call them, whenever James is around are hilarious. Great chapter!
4/8/2006 c2 Weeping Duck
I'm slightly surprised of James's sudden interest in Delilah (omg, "Hey There, Delilah" has to be one of the best songs EVER!), and I have to admit to wanting to see him play her. Anyway, I'm still liking the sarcasm. Good job!
I'm slightly surprised of James's sudden interest in Delilah (omg, "Hey There, Delilah" has to be one of the best songs EVER!), and I have to admit to wanting to see him play her. Anyway, I'm still liking the sarcasm. Good job!