for Mood Rings4/8/2006 c1 
15Weeping Duck
First of all, I really love how sterotypical the high school is; it completely reminds me of mine, sadly. I also like Delilah's personality and how she narrates with sarcasm.
15Weeping DuckFirst of all, I really love how sterotypical the high school is; it completely reminds me of mine, sadly. I also like Delilah's personality and how she narrates with sarcasm.
4/5/2006 c3 2rewind regrets
Hmm, this story...is addicting! I like how normal she is that she can practically relate to every teenage girl out there(except bimbos). Well, I like the story so far.
2rewind regretsHmm, this story...is addicting! I like how normal she is that she can practically relate to every teenage girl out there(except bimbos). Well, I like the story so far.
1/24/2006 c2 2Phillipea
I like it so far. Just don't make her psycho ok? It seems that in order to avoid the Hilary Duff type that everyone is makign their protaganists absolutely psycho. PLease don't do that, a little bit of hyperness is ok; but psycho freak who you don't want to be within a mile radius of is a lil scary.
2PhillipeaI like it so far. Just don't make her psycho ok? It seems that in order to avoid the Hilary Duff type that everyone is makign their protaganists absolutely psycho. PLease don't do that, a little bit of hyperness is ok; but psycho freak who you don't want to be within a mile radius of is a lil scary.
1/24/2006 c2 1Twinkle Star Bell
I really really like this story. The funny thing is me and my friends pretend to be gangsta yo too! lol. I also just finished reading To Kill A Mockingbird in my class so that was sorta freaky. I really like this story so far and it's got a good theme with the mood ring and all. I also like the characters and I think James is pretty hot sounding. There's this kid at my school named James and he's pretty hot. Update soon this is really good!
1Twinkle Star BellI really really like this story. The funny thing is me and my friends pretend to be gangsta yo too! lol. I also just finished reading To Kill A Mockingbird in my class so that was sorta freaky. I really like this story so far and it's got a good theme with the mood ring and all. I also like the characters and I think James is pretty hot sounding. There's this kid at my school named James and he's pretty hot. Update soon this is really good!
1/24/2006 c2 1Aruru
lol. I had to read To Kill A Mockingbird and do a review on it! That's great! Spanish-Gansta, yo. Nice. -beams- Greast chapterz.
1Arurulol. I had to read To Kill A Mockingbird and do a review on it! That's great! Spanish-Gansta, yo. Nice. -beams- Greast chapterz.
1/24/2006 c2 3florissant
nice beginning...hm moodrings. i don't think i've ever seen that one done before. hope you continue to update- i'd like to see how it leads on from here.
3florissantnice beginning...hm moodrings. i don't think i've ever seen that one done before. hope you continue to update- i'd like to see how it leads on from here.
1/18/2006 c1 Cooties
This is great! I love Delilah's voice! It's really direct and real, I love it! Sounds really cute so far, the mood-ring-thing was a cool way to start the story. Andrew sounds really cool! Good luck writing it!
This is great! I love Delilah's voice! It's really direct and real, I love it! Sounds really cute so far, the mood-ring-thing was a cool way to start the story. Andrew sounds really cool! Good luck writing it!
1/18/2006 c1 10Curtis White
This is really interesting. I love the style of narration. Reading the main characters blunt, sarcastic inner-thoughts is quite a nice gimmick.
As for feeling sympathy, yes, I think I can feel some sympathy for her, but not because of her deceased father, of course. Sheesh, duh, people.
I'd like to see where this story goes, but a word of advice, as cliché as romance stories get, try not to be too cliché unless it is needed to develop the theme.
I get this from my English professer sometimes, so I think it might serve you well, although it's, obviously, entirely up to you.
10Curtis WhiteThis is really interesting. I love the style of narration. Reading the main characters blunt, sarcastic inner-thoughts is quite a nice gimmick.
As for feeling sympathy, yes, I think I can feel some sympathy for her, but not because of her deceased father, of course. Sheesh, duh, people.
I'd like to see where this story goes, but a word of advice, as cliché as romance stories get, try not to be too cliché unless it is needed to develop the theme.
I get this from my English professer sometimes, so I think it might serve you well, although it's, obviously, entirely up to you.