for Mood Rings1/27/2007 c22 wandless
Smashingly wonderful story! I've really enjoyed reading it so far and I hope your future chapters will be as great. I love your (MOO)s, they make me laugh, they're so cute and funny. I think you've done an excellent job with your characters and their relationships. I really like the way Delilah reacted to being raped (if she was raped, which I really hope she wasn't) and I love the whole love thing between Andrew and Delilah. It's really sweet. This is one of the better stories I've read on FP, if not one of the best. Please continue to write - you're very talented, and please update soon!
Smashingly wonderful story! I've really enjoyed reading it so far and I hope your future chapters will be as great. I love your (MOO)s, they make me laugh, they're so cute and funny. I think you've done an excellent job with your characters and their relationships. I really like the way Delilah reacted to being raped (if she was raped, which I really hope she wasn't) and I love the whole love thing between Andrew and Delilah. It's really sweet. This is one of the better stories I've read on FP, if not one of the best. Please continue to write - you're very talented, and please update soon!
1/23/2007 c22 
19Olivine
another great chapter. (before i forget [like i COULD], i love that picture of andrew on your profile page) this is an awesome story, and it really seems like its ending, which is bad. but then again, i see a couple stories there along with Mood Rings, so i can go and pick up one of those. anyways... yeah, i the reason i feel like its ending is because of the line "“It’s okay.” And I knew it would be" just before the last (MOO) thingy. thats depressing. oh, well. like i said, youve got other stories... in the meantime, get those new pics up soon and a new chappie up, too, mkay? or else your pants will be flaming. and the fire department will conveniently be on another job...
keep on writing -Ss.
19Olivineanother great chapter. (before i forget [like i COULD], i love that picture of andrew on your profile page) this is an awesome story, and it really seems like its ending, which is bad. but then again, i see a couple stories there along with Mood Rings, so i can go and pick up one of those. anyways... yeah, i the reason i feel like its ending is because of the line "“It’s okay.” And I knew it would be" just before the last (MOO) thingy. thats depressing. oh, well. like i said, youve got other stories... in the meantime, get those new pics up soon and a new chappie up, too, mkay? or else your pants will be flaming. and the fire department will conveniently be on another job...
keep on writing -Ss.
1/23/2007 c22 Alenor
hmm...ok, you'd think her brother would be smart enough to actual avoid alcohol after being in rehab for so long but ahh well. and what's her mum got to say i wonder? can't wait for more ~ Alenor.
hmm...ok, you'd think her brother would be smart enough to actual avoid alcohol after being in rehab for so long but ahh well. and what's her mum got to say i wonder? can't wait for more ~ Alenor.
1/20/2007 c22 emily
lo siento but ive given up on this for now. it doesnt update enough and i dont like having to like read back to remmeber
when youre all done lemme know
lo siento but ive given up on this for now. it doesnt update enough and i dont like having to like read back to remmeber
when youre all done lemme know
1/19/2007 c22 ohshittae
man, that was "bitin". (bitin is a tagalog word for..um dunno..like cliffhanger or something like that)...what did her mom wanna say...haiz...
i'm still uber-confused if derek really raped her or not...i guess im just densed...but please help me out, any one?
man, that was "bitin". (bitin is a tagalog word for..um dunno..like cliffhanger or something like that)...what did her mom wanna say...haiz...
i'm still uber-confused if derek really raped her or not...i guess im just densed...but please help me out, any one?
1/19/2007 c21 ohshittae
hn, i was wondering...
was she really raped? and she could forgive derek after all he did? huwaw, she's uber-nice ah.
and um...what happened to her brother? man, that forest's so weird...and scary. (haha..i sound like a 5-yr old) he's like my cousin who did drugs...he beat his mom up before...poor aunt...
(man, i suck at this...anyway, hu cares..?)
hn, i was wondering...
was she really raped? and she could forgive derek after all he did? huwaw, she's uber-nice ah.
and um...what happened to her brother? man, that forest's so weird...and scary. (haha..i sound like a 5-yr old) he's like my cousin who did drugs...he beat his mom up before...poor aunt...
(man, i suck at this...anyway, hu cares..?)
1/13/2007 c22 SilverWolf13x
This is very awesome. I love your story. :D
The other 4 are good too, but this one is my favorite.
It flows really well/isn't difficult to follow at all and I don't have any constructive criticism so I think I'll praise your story again and go away. ^_^
Tis very awesomely awesome!
Update! :D
PS: This is Dani
This is very awesome. I love your story. :D
The other 4 are good too, but this one is my favorite.
It flows really well/isn't difficult to follow at all and I don't have any constructive criticism so I think I'll praise your story again and go away. ^_^
Tis very awesomely awesome!
Update! :D
PS: This is Dani
1/6/2007 c22 Janeee
hi,
...first I gotta say..its was great, I haven't read one this long for a few months, and I know everyone will say that. Can I say I stayed 5 in the morning just to read it, of course I didn't finished it . . ohh ...did she change hospital rooms? cuz the numbers was different, me and my memories .. I cried for those sad parts when Del was feeling down, and the mushy parts which I loved xD. I am looking for more xP.
-Jane
hi,
...first I gotta say..its was great, I haven't read one this long for a few months, and I know everyone will say that. Can I say I stayed 5 in the morning just to read it, of course I didn't finished it . . ohh ...did she change hospital rooms? cuz the numbers was different, me and my memories .. I cried for those sad parts when Del was feeling down, and the mushy parts which I loved xD. I am looking for more xP.
-Jane
1/4/2007 c22 TheTrueBlue41728
Liar, liar. Pants on fire. Hanging from the telephone wire.
I was surprised. I came home. I checked my e-mail. And zomg, you actually updated!
I was happy.
Yay.
Liar, liar. Pants on fire. Hanging from the telephone wire.
I was surprised. I came home. I checked my e-mail. And zomg, you actually updated!
I was happy.
Yay.
1/4/2007 c22 1blazing aura
damn you and ur wonderful writing skillz. I loved this chapter, and i was so surprised when i saw that you updated. Haha, well I love you chicka, and keep up the good work.
1blazing auradamn you and ur wonderful writing skillz. I loved this chapter, and i was so surprised when i saw that you updated. Haha, well I love you chicka, and keep up the good work.
12/23/2006 c22 3rabid.squirrels
I love your story and I can't wait to read your next chapter! :) It'd be so sad if something happened to that man :(
3rabid.squirrelsI love your story and I can't wait to read your next chapter! :) It'd be so sad if something happened to that man :(
12/23/2006 c22 18pinkfluffyoranges
This story is simply amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. every chapter is better then the last, and things are starting to wind up. Your super duper writer, and i'm thrilled to have stumble dupon this story. keep up th egood work and i hope to read the next chapter soon.
18pinkfluffyorangesThis story is simply amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. every chapter is better then the last, and things are starting to wind up. Your super duper writer, and i'm thrilled to have stumble dupon this story. keep up th egood work and i hope to read the next chapter soon.
12/21/2006 c22 Emily
I want to bang Ace.
Like always and constantly.
I want to bang Ace.
Like always and constantly.