11/14/2006 c21 19Olivine
it seems like this story is coming to an end. i really hope not, because i love these characters so much. and im really used to them. ive been following their story since like april, when you first got it on here. thats a long time...

anways, for the billionth time, i love andrew. i wish i knew a guy like that. well, not one who would give in to black mail (wait, what exactly WAS the blackmail...?) but the sweet, gentle, caring kind. there arent any guys like that at my school. theyre all just idiots. and none of them talk to me anyways, but i dont think you really needed to know that. :)

last but most certainly not least, im glad that theres a possibility that she wasnt raped. but then again, theres that 50/50 chance. she doesnt remember, and he might not even remember, so... we may never know.

keep on writing -Ss.

11/14/2006 c21 icedfaerie
Great chapter! Can't wait until the next one.

11/12/2006 c20 carlyatthedisco
pushed open the door slowly...

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11/7/2006 c20 alongtheway
hey there, delilah. =D

ahahahaha. i just had to be normal for a moment because, inside, i'm a little...wild. Wild, meaning delirously happy that i found your story, incredibly warm and fuzzy that Drew sang to Del and that she sang back, extremely sad that Forest drank again and blurted out all those hurtful stuff and about her getting into an accident when he seemed so sweet on his return, and...god, you just bring me into the scenes, you know?

i'm in love. =)

i need to tell you that i love the title. =) and there's something about the way you write that doesn't make it long and draggy, something that makes it just so...real. like the part where del felt excluded from her friends. it's so true, because it's so unrealistic when authors write that everything is okay and goody when the characters are with their friends. i mean, we all go through shit at times, get annoyed by our friends, feel left out at times.

and, boy, you made me laugh and tear. =) and i absolutely adore how you always say 'same difference'. haha. =) and maybe you won't believe me, but the first time i saw (MOO), the scene break, i cracked up like there was no tomorrow =D i swear by my ice lollies. =)and then i laughed so much about the lettuce on bread and penguin thing in the earlier chapters that everyone stared at me. my brother and sister, not even knowing what i was on about, actually cracked up as well =D

you write with some sort of... neutral tone with a cynical touch that actually makes the emotions show more. like when del mentioned her father's death in the first chapter, there was no dragging on of how lonely or sad that she was, but you just went on with her story. thanks for that, really. it made me sympathetic, but i'm glad you didn't pull it along, if you know what i'm talking about. =) and i feel the emotions more throughout the story in this way.

i like how james referred to the crew as 'and co' in chapter 3. =) and the 'first step is admitting it' thing is damn hilarious haha. future husband! =D

OH and drew must've been so surprised to see del outside his door after he knew about josh and hana, yeah? aww=D it's awfully sweet to find out that someone's been in love with you for so long haha. and i like james! actually i liked ace too, but he's been a jerk with all the shit about kissing some chick after meeting del. it's kinda sad hana hadn't really been a good friend, but i guess we all let each other down at times. and i love drew and del! =D just in case you're wondering where the love went. =)

honestly i still can't get over the fact that derek actually raped her and no one knows. i think hospital staff are gonna find out when del's undergoing surgery. and del deluded herself into thinking that nothing happened, and that she was okay, that she was happy. i went through it all the faking too, and got left wondering whether it actually took place. screw the irony. it was painful to read about how she smiled and bore everything even after walking in on drew and natalie, drew and alicia, ash and that chick... and how del seems so normal about it all. and how the hell do you write such an amazing story? dude i love ya =D

and you cheated me! haha. the confessing of eternal love thing after drew took out derek. =) GO DREW! =D and i'm actually wondering if james IS gay haha.

i have to go, but i need to say that you and your story are FANTASTIC =D

Love, alongtheway =D

11/4/2006 c20 Kelani
cliffy? no way! wah! pls pls pls update!

11/3/2006 c20 icedfaerie
Dang it! You had to leave us in such suspense, didn't you?

11/2/2006 c20 3megamegaturtle
Painful...Keep up the good work!

11/1/2006 c20 25pinkfairydust
no.

no no no no NO!

what is stupid Forest talking about! he should crawl in a hole and DIE! that's so mean...gr i hate him.

took you a while to update!:P thanks!