
8/26/2006 c19
3Schloss
i was just getting to the interesting part... *sigh*...lol. meh, so cant wait for the next chapter, as to your Author's Note, your story aint depressing, i mean most people fantasize a perfect world, but no-one is perfect, i like your story,in all it shows a hell good portrayal of school life.lol. i really love the way you write too, its i dunno, chipper/bubbly/comedunny (made up word of mine)(excuse it...!)lol. well yeh, great stuff :D

i was just getting to the interesting part... *sigh*...lol. meh, so cant wait for the next chapter, as to your Author's Note, your story aint depressing, i mean most people fantasize a perfect world, but no-one is perfect, i like your story,in all it shows a hell good portrayal of school life.lol. i really love the way you write too, its i dunno, chipper/bubbly/comedunny (made up word of mine)(excuse it...!)lol. well yeh, great stuff :D
8/26/2006 c13 thepastisthepast
omgomg she should totally be with ace~for some reason i dont really like andrew as much as ace...hehe
omgomg she should totally be with ace~for some reason i dont really like andrew as much as ace...hehe
8/26/2006 c11 Guest
ok im getting really confuesd now: was she raped or not? cuz it was in those quotes..and secondly why is she being so nice to him if he raped her and kissing him back and all that?
ok im getting really confuesd now: was she raped or not? cuz it was in those quotes..and secondly why is she being so nice to him if he raped her and kissing him back and all that?
8/26/2006 c10 Guest
i like this wuite a lot right now,but i just have a little question: was she raped or not? and if she was, then she's acting too lighthearted and undisturbed. most ppl would probably act really weird and cry a lot for what seems like no reason, or at least cry by themselves quietly...
i like this wuite a lot right now,but i just have a little question: was she raped or not? and if she was, then she's acting too lighthearted and undisturbed. most ppl would probably act really weird and cry a lot for what seems like no reason, or at least cry by themselves quietly...
8/26/2006 c19
3readingismything
real nice! i wonder what's the surprise, ihope andrew doesn't disappoints me and finally does the EXPEXCTED thing...plz go on n update soon!

real nice! i wonder what's the surprise, ihope andrew doesn't disappoints me and finally does the EXPEXCTED thing...plz go on n update soon!
8/25/2006 c19
19Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose
Oh! No! So depressing that there isn't another chapter. I can sort of identify with her, at least with the whole having a boyfriend who wasn't quite who you thought he was. Mm. Yeah. I love how you use (MOO) as your page divider thingy. It rocks my nonexistent socks...um. Not wearing socks so...yeah. There are a few teesny likkle typo thingymabobs, but everybody has typos and the fact that your story is frikking AWESOME makes up for that. Yeah. Totally. Ok. I really hope that at the party Drew declares his undying love for her...dude, my sleep deprived brain has just totally forgotten the main characters name...oh my god. well, anyways. Yeah. James is so adorable...does he have a boyfriend? Cuz that would be cute...Hmm. I very much enjoy this and hope that you update ASAP!

Oh! No! So depressing that there isn't another chapter. I can sort of identify with her, at least with the whole having a boyfriend who wasn't quite who you thought he was. Mm. Yeah. I love how you use (MOO) as your page divider thingy. It rocks my nonexistent socks...um. Not wearing socks so...yeah. There are a few teesny likkle typo thingymabobs, but everybody has typos and the fact that your story is frikking AWESOME makes up for that. Yeah. Totally. Ok. I really hope that at the party Drew declares his undying love for her...dude, my sleep deprived brain has just totally forgotten the main characters name...oh my god. well, anyways. Yeah. James is so adorable...does he have a boyfriend? Cuz that would be cute...Hmm. I very much enjoy this and hope that you update ASAP!
8/25/2006 c19 Hanana the Banana
SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME is that shirt you bought in this story the shirt you used for the spanish collage thingy? bwahahhahah coolness, i likei like a lot! wah you need to update more! And i'm getting this story published and you will be rich and a worldwide starlet, and world wide starlets get much boys..:) keep up the awesome work ya hot pot of col frijoles!
SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME is that shirt you bought in this story the shirt you used for the spanish collage thingy? bwahahhahah coolness, i likei like a lot! wah you need to update more! And i'm getting this story published and you will be rich and a worldwide starlet, and world wide starlets get much boys..:) keep up the awesome work ya hot pot of col frijoles!
8/25/2006 c19 Emily
Okay two things...
Delilah and Hana sound really pretty in this one
Also, I have a guess as to what is gonna happen, but I'm not gonna tell.
Okay two things...
Delilah and Hana sound really pretty in this one
Also, I have a guess as to what is gonna happen, but I'm not gonna tell.
8/20/2006 c18 Slander By Osmosis
This chapter was GREAT - I think your best yet. Anyway, please update soon!
- Lithely
This chapter was GREAT - I think your best yet. Anyway, please update soon!
- Lithely
8/18/2006 c18
1Aruru
OMGz, I love your time breaking MOO. It's Udderly delicious(get it moo? Cow? /Udder/ly? Lol? Ah, foret you...
And What?
No Smoking, Babe.

OMGz, I love your time breaking MOO. It's Udderly delicious(get it moo? Cow? /Udder/ly? Lol? Ah, foret you...
And What?
No Smoking, Babe.
8/17/2006 c18
2tiger-lily9240
hey! i love yr story! jsut one ques hehe might sound stupid but...um...is this the last chapt? ok kill me if im clueless but yea...:P lol but i DO love yr stories cld u pls pls pls read mine? if u dont want to its ok! cheers

hey! i love yr story! jsut one ques hehe might sound stupid but...um...is this the last chapt? ok kill me if im clueless but yea...:P lol but i DO love yr stories cld u pls pls pls read mine? if u dont want to its ok! cheers