for The Great Work1/30/2006 c1 
7Freya-was-taken
It was good, I liked it, but your 6th line could use another syllable and it would sound better. Otherwise though, it was nice.
7Freya-was-takenIt was good, I liked it, but your 6th line could use another syllable and it would sound better. Otherwise though, it was nice.
1/23/2006 c1 13lipgloss-and-blacktears
I like the way you used old english in this piece, it gives it a nice touch. It flows very neatly.
13lipgloss-and-blacktearsI like the way you used old english in this piece, it gives it a nice touch. It flows very neatly.
1/23/2006 c1 10just a teardrop
i love the old-fashioned style of writing you've used with this. nice work!
10just a teardropi love the old-fashioned style of writing you've used with this. nice work!