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9dragonfire-lina144
Oh. My. GAWD!
Du-uude, this is...is incredibly well-written. The sorrowful, dark tone...The images that every single word conjures...I LOVE IT!
I applaud and salute you for this fantastic work!
9dragonfire-lina144Oh. My. GAWD!
Du-uude, this is...is incredibly well-written. The sorrowful, dark tone...The images that every single word conjures...I LOVE IT!
I applaud and salute you for this fantastic work!
3/13/2006 c1 11GeekyChica
Oh, it's so refreshing to see that there are still people out there writing INTELLIGENT songs. Great job.
11GeekyChicaOh, it's so refreshing to see that there are still people out there writing INTELLIGENT songs. Great job.
3/10/2006 c1 8A-wolf-called-Skya
wow. nice song. mine suck :P Wish i knew the tune thugh *sigh* ah well. :)
anyways, good writing!
-Rachel Morgan.
P.S. could you read shadows of the night, and maybe air is you have time? i would love to hear from ya!
thanx!:D
8A-wolf-called-Skyawow. nice song. mine suck :P Wish i knew the tune thugh *sigh* ah well. :)
anyways, good writing!
-Rachel Morgan.
P.S. could you read shadows of the night, and maybe air is you have time? i would love to hear from ya!
thanx!:D
2/13/2006 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
Wow... this is really deep... love the little macabre touch... Is this an evanescence sort of thing? Sorry if i'm wrong... the lyrics reminded me so much of that band...
Wow... this is really deep... love the little macabre touch... Is this an evanescence sort of thing? Sorry if i'm wrong... the lyrics reminded me so much of that band...
2/12/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
i can tell just by the words the amount of emotion poured into this piece~ very well done
keep writing!
132mizu no kokoroi can tell just by the words the amount of emotion poured into this piece~ very well done
keep writing!
1/22/2006 c1 104FunkyFlower
this is absolutely phenomenal! i just adore the rhyme scheme throughout and the bridge was especially fantastic! great ending and i was reading ur profile btw and i noticed that we're both in grade 10 or as we brits call it, year 10...but anyway, u r an awesome poet...i dunno about ur fic cuz i havent read it but this poem is brill! and of course, thank you so much 4 all ur amazing reviews! they hav made my day! lol. i totally agree with ur review 4 my poem 'let me go'...sometimes i wonder too if we're all just slaves 2 the expectations of the above generation. btw, 4 ur review 2 my poem on pride and prejudice, i would recommend that book tho i dunno about her (jane austens') other works cuz i havent read them...yet. lol. srry 4 getting off the point. now, back 2 this poem, it's amazing and i look forward 2 reading more of ur stuff. keep writing,
~mez~
104FunkyFlowerthis is absolutely phenomenal! i just adore the rhyme scheme throughout and the bridge was especially fantastic! great ending and i was reading ur profile btw and i noticed that we're both in grade 10 or as we brits call it, year 10...but anyway, u r an awesome poet...i dunno about ur fic cuz i havent read it but this poem is brill! and of course, thank you so much 4 all ur amazing reviews! they hav made my day! lol. i totally agree with ur review 4 my poem 'let me go'...sometimes i wonder too if we're all just slaves 2 the expectations of the above generation. btw, 4 ur review 2 my poem on pride and prejudice, i would recommend that book tho i dunno about her (jane austens') other works cuz i havent read them...yet. lol. srry 4 getting off the point. now, back 2 this poem, it's amazing and i look forward 2 reading more of ur stuff. keep writing,
~mez~
1/21/2006 c1 57empathic life
Oh. O.O I like! I don't normally read songs, but you're an exception. Hehe. Anyways, I love the last line. It was an awesome last line. You're missing some spaces, though... Well, basically, I like it. A lot. And I'm the first reviewer! Woot to me! All right... Keep writing! Love much, Empathic Life
57empathic lifeOh. O.O I like! I don't normally read songs, but you're an exception. Hehe. Anyways, I love the last line. It was an awesome last line. You're missing some spaces, though... Well, basically, I like it. A lot. And I'm the first reviewer! Woot to me! All right... Keep writing! Love much, Empathic Life