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2/14/2006 c1 229TheBrokenWanderer
I see why this would be your personal favorite...it's beautiful...

~TheBrokenWanderer~
1/20/2006 c1 13my life is a techno song
Very cool
1/20/2006 c1 20sTrive
Interesting... i realize that it's meant to focus on paper, but the repition of that word almost makes it unpleasant to read. Almost. ^_^
1/20/2006 c1 35Strangerwithnoface
Hmm, I liked that. I liked the idea, although, where you cut off the lines O_O it seemed a little choppy. Theres no punctuation O_O which may have helped the choppiness, but the rhyming is nice. Kinda subtle. I liked the repitition.
1/20/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I really like this - it’s such a powerful visual, a paper mask, really it’s of no use in the world yet they still hold onto it so dearly. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

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