for Hot Gurl11/22/2010 c25 lsdkjfh
"I like science" ahahhahahhahhaha
"I like science" ahahhahahhahhaha
11/22/2010 c16 ejkdfn
HOLY FxCK! Zach was shot? What the bloody hell is going on ahg
HOLY FxCK! Zach was shot? What the bloody hell is going on ahg
7/6/2008 c37 Cerasylvania
hey i love this story it just reminds me of my group of friends minus the situations but still a bunch that well except people for who they are and especially people who want to get their body pierced, tattoed, their favorite color is black.etc. but you know also the fact that they well stand up for each other like a mini gang lol but yup love it and you know what i think it would be interesting to see their lives after marriage and a honeymoon you know but that is definately something you have to choose for yourself.
i just have one question: what would be the one thing you'ld want to be remembered for?
hey i love this story it just reminds me of my group of friends minus the situations but still a bunch that well except people for who they are and especially people who want to get their body pierced, tattoed, their favorite color is black.etc. but you know also the fact that they well stand up for each other like a mini gang lol but yup love it and you know what i think it would be interesting to see their lives after marriage and a honeymoon you know but that is definately something you have to choose for yourself.
i just have one question: what would be the one thing you'ld want to be remembered for?
10/21/2006 c37 
2akaCHEEKS
omg! it's done! shit! and when i checked this story.. i thought it was only an update.. but it's seriously done! wow! omg! i love it! with the whole thing. with all the drama and everything and all their pain and hardships... but then you made it sound like all of those happened in one day cause in a shorter version.. it was like he left her, days later he realizes his mistake and he comes back to her. get me? i mean what was that? no offense.. i'm not trying to be mean. but i'm trying to give you constructive critizism you know... pretty much.. work on details..
2akaCHEEKSomg! it's done! shit! and when i checked this story.. i thought it was only an update.. but it's seriously done! wow! omg! i love it! with the whole thing. with all the drama and everything and all their pain and hardships... but then you made it sound like all of those happened in one day cause in a shorter version.. it was like he left her, days later he realizes his mistake and he comes back to her. get me? i mean what was that? no offense.. i'm not trying to be mean. but i'm trying to give you constructive critizism you know... pretty much.. work on details..
10/8/2006 c20 akaCHEEKS
it's going nice so far. but you should try and check your grammars and everything. some of the words i know you're trying to make em sound ghetto and come out that way with the slang and everything. but the details need to be typed properly. that's all for my creative critizicing. hope your not thinking i'm a bitch for pointing this out cause most authors get mad when i tell them something that needs to get better at.
it's going nice so far. but you should try and check your grammars and everything. some of the words i know you're trying to make em sound ghetto and come out that way with the slang and everything. but the details need to be typed properly. that's all for my creative critizicing. hope your not thinking i'm a bitch for pointing this out cause most authors get mad when i tell them something that needs to get better at.
10/8/2006 c37 8Out-Spoken-Runaway
What do you mean 'not the end'? A sequel, perhaps? They better not get seperated...
I didn't really expect it to end it here, but now that I think about it, there isn't much else that could happen. Loved the ending; keep writing!
Out-Spoken-Runaway
8Out-Spoken-RunawayWhat do you mean 'not the end'? A sequel, perhaps? They better not get seperated...
I didn't really expect it to end it here, but now that I think about it, there isn't much else that could happen. Loved the ending; keep writing!
Out-Spoken-Runaway
10/8/2006 c37 1Hope.And.What.Not
i know this is a weird thing to say but i dont give a crap, i dont think you should carry this on. I think you should levae it be. Although i just got a cool thought in my head you may like but ill tell you if your interested in carrying it on.
meggzz x
1Hope.And.What.Noti know this is a weird thing to say but i dont give a crap, i dont think you should carry this on. I think you should levae it be. Although i just got a cool thought in my head you may like but ill tell you if your interested in carrying it on.
meggzz x
10/7/2006 c37 2let me scream my heart out
omg i cant believe you've finished this story is ace hope u update your oher soon
2let me scream my heart outomg i cant believe you've finished this story is ace hope u update your oher soon