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10/11/2006 c1 67Lost In Context
Libraries are always so nice and peaceful, with that nice thick silence. I love the metaphor about silence and space.

(P.S. Thanks for the review. Much appreciated.)
5/17/2006 c1 42Emmytastic gal
Stunning. so very true. the library is my favourite place. keep up the fantastic stuff.

write on,Em
2/5/2006 c1 23Fina Arvanthol
I agree with pink dandy lion. The lines: "silence reigns in his wistful throne" and "space his everlasting queen" are what make this poem a great read. I'd like to see you add more to it too. It's so good, and there are so many possibilities for its expansion. Great work!
1/20/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
'Silence reigns in his wistful throneand space his everlasting queen.' makes this worth the read. My only constructive criticism is to delve deeper there is much more you can add to this to make it great.

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