1/25/2006 c1 90poetic abortion
this is breathtaking. the whole thing is eloquently spoken, every line is unseemingly perfect & it all just brings this distorted message to it; the death of a loved one and the other aspects that come along with it. this whole thing made me think of times when my sister was in the hostpital for this & that, especially when young, it brings me back & makes me want to cry (that or curl in a ball and hope that it won't happen again).

[basically; i love this poem so much, you have gorgeous/unrelentant talent. LOVE.]

~* noelle

1/23/2006 c1 19wonderland is different now
wow...i could never be able to stand it if any of my family died. stay strong! your brother would not have wanted you to not continue your life. you are in my thoughts, and so is your brother.

1/21/2006 c1 77by His blood
ohgod, i'm so sorry... i wish i could express through the internet how sorry i am, but i can't, so all i can do is say that i really, really hope you can get through this, & hope that you believe me. i'll keep your brother in my thoughts (i don't pray, so that's the best i can do). good luck with everything... again, i'm so sorry, & at least your brother is happier now. i'm grateful for that, & i hope you'll feel better soon. again, good luck, & i'm so sorry.

1/21/2006 c1 wolfspawn
Very beautiful. My condolences.