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1/23/2006 c1 7Novacula Amor
Interesting. And I like the vagueness. If this isn't a oneshot, I'd like to read the other chapters.
1/21/2006 c1 13sNiCKeTFiRE
it's short, but it's not bad. it's just that i don't really know what the story is about yet or even who it's about, either. (you may want to press enter between quotations to make it easier to distinguish conversation between mother and son)

I liked it, though, don't get me wrong. I'm very curoius about it ... and is going to have more chapters? Because if it's a prologue, then naturally a sense of being vague is understandable because a prologue's job is usually to suck the reader in. In the case of it being a prologue, it can't get much better ... except for pressing the enter key.

~snicket

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