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2/21/2006 c1 9Kartoffel on Canvas
*sigh* you say my poetry makes you sad because you lose focus, k. well i encourage critisism, but only the constructive kind. ok i will explain the poem you commented. It is about society and how it has drifted away from love and more towards casual hookups. It relates this to the classic novel "Brave New World", a novel that most people have read by the tenth grade. If you lose focus, is it because you dont understand the concept, or is it something to do with my style? im really not trying to sound mean, just to understand.

*constructive*critisism welcome:)

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