for Lonely11/27/2006 c1 
19cycle.of.ashes
Even though he's not real, I still feel so bad for him... Is that possible? Hm. Anyway. Well-written, there's enough philosophy in there to make my head hurt. Ow. good job!
19cycle.of.ashesEven though he's not real, I still feel so bad for him... Is that possible? Hm. Anyway. Well-written, there's enough philosophy in there to make my head hurt. Ow. good job!
2/20/2006 c1 lostinscotland
i'm not gonna lie, i only skimmed this story, didn't read the full thing, but i definitely got the gist of it, and all i can say is, wow. that's amazing. just...wow
i'm not gonna lie, i only skimmed this story, didn't read the full thing, but i definitely got the gist of it, and all i can say is, wow. that's amazing. just...wow
2/3/2006 c1 7Yrouna
I liked the implication during the scene when she first saw Brian.. She looked at the couch to make sure she was alone, locked the door, then he was lying on the couch. Nice..At first i thought it was a mistake, then i realized you probably did it on purpose. :) okay, so i really really liked this story. i could perfectly relate to Ellen coz i also felt alone in my first year in high school. *sigh* i think this is really good.
p.s. thanks for reviewing my story.. (i can't be mean.. i juz couldnt find anything to criticize and i'm not much of a critique myself. :))
7YrounaI liked the implication during the scene when she first saw Brian.. She looked at the couch to make sure she was alone, locked the door, then he was lying on the couch. Nice..At first i thought it was a mistake, then i realized you probably did it on purpose. :) okay, so i really really liked this story. i could perfectly relate to Ellen coz i also felt alone in my first year in high school. *sigh* i think this is really good.
p.s. thanks for reviewing my story.. (i can't be mean.. i juz couldnt find anything to criticize and i'm not much of a critique myself. :))
1/27/2006 c1 2Payie
That was amazing. It was explained so clearly how something like that could happen; my first semester in college reminded me a lot of how she felt-just absolute loneliness. I love how you put it too-that she loved people, she just only could confide in a few. It was so touching to-I got all teary eyed as she was trying to convince herself that Brian wasn't real haha
Anyways, I thought it was wonderfully well done!
2PayieThat was amazing. It was explained so clearly how something like that could happen; my first semester in college reminded me a lot of how she felt-just absolute loneliness. I love how you put it too-that she loved people, she just only could confide in a few. It was so touching to-I got all teary eyed as she was trying to convince herself that Brian wasn't real haha
Anyways, I thought it was wonderfully well done!