1/30/2006 c1 23Nothing Profound
Ich...auch?...liebe dich! Ich bin crazy! Yay for being the same! And, by the way, this poem completely rocks. I love it like jelly loves peanut butter...Or something. Carrots out!
Ich...auch?...liebe dich! Ich bin crazy! Yay for being the same! And, by the way, this poem completely rocks. I love it like jelly loves peanut butter...Or something. Carrots out!
1/21/2006 c1 60dollface and her cancer
"Your liquorish lips aren't my type".. yeah. Wow. Wow, wow, wow. Pardon my speechlessness, but I adore that line.
"Your liquorish lips aren't my type".. yeah. Wow. Wow, wow, wow. Pardon my speechlessness, but I adore that line.
1/21/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This has a great story line with wonderful visual imagery. I like how the flow stops and starts to emphasize the actions in certain places. Excellent work.
This has a great story line with wonderful visual imagery. I like how the flow stops and starts to emphasize the actions in certain places. Excellent work.
1/21/2006 c1 10just a teardrop
oh wow! i love this, i really do. my favourite bits are the 'running through puddles when there was no rain' and the 'you can't finish my sentences and you can never read my stories'. love it!
oh wow! i love this, i really do. my favourite bits are the 'running through puddles when there was no rain' and the 'you can't finish my sentences and you can never read my stories'. love it!