for chemistry10/29/2006 c1 
32eldrin
It actually brought tears to my eyes to see something written this well. Wow. Amazing. Wonderful. I love how this is emotional but also makes the reader -think-. It's thought big imagery all the way through. I had to look up the last three formulas but when I did I realized the pure genius of the piece. So it maybe took a moment to set in, perhaps that's what makes this piece so brilliant. Very creative, and I applaud you, for it is a fitting tribute to the joys and non-joys of chemistry and how it relates to the human.
32eldrinIt actually brought tears to my eyes to see something written this well. Wow. Amazing. Wonderful. I love how this is emotional but also makes the reader -think-. It's thought big imagery all the way through. I had to look up the last three formulas but when I did I realized the pure genius of the piece. So it maybe took a moment to set in, perhaps that's what makes this piece so brilliant. Very creative, and I applaud you, for it is a fitting tribute to the joys and non-joys of chemistry and how it relates to the human.
7/23/2006 c1 thesquaredtriangle
oops and i forgot to mention- drinking liquid nitrogen?
i wrote that before in one of my poems. yummy.
oops and i forgot to mention- drinking liquid nitrogen?
i wrote that before in one of my poems. yummy.
7/23/2006 c1 51rightclick5ave
this is crazy! a tribute to chem indeed.. i'm supposed to be mugging for my O's but here i am reading FP and well. at least i can say i learnt something. okay, the organic chem right at the end is like WTF to me cos i haven't revised my orgchem, but aww man this is just supersweet (:
51rightclick5avethis is crazy! a tribute to chem indeed.. i'm supposed to be mugging for my O's but here i am reading FP and well. at least i can say i learnt something. okay, the organic chem right at the end is like WTF to me cos i haven't revised my orgchem, but aww man this is just supersweet (:
4/14/2006 c1 21Insane-Rassbery
Amazing! I love your style and how the words flow from one to another. I like the scinece references. (Something I would of never thought of). I also love "as addictive as butterfly dust"...-Insane RassberyP.S. Thank you for the review!
21Insane-RassberyAmazing! I love your style and how the words flow from one to another. I like the scinece references. (Something I would of never thought of). I also love "as addictive as butterfly dust"...-Insane RassberyP.S. Thank you for the review!
3/14/2006 c1 8bulletproof.cupid
hah, i'm such a loser. i was actually naming the elements and compounds in my head. i hate chem right now. . . the teacher's getting on my nerves. and i have no idea why i'm telling you this. eh, good work kid.
8bulletproof.cupidhah, i'm such a loser. i was actually naming the elements and compounds in my head. i hate chem right now. . . the teacher's getting on my nerves. and i have no idea why i'm telling you this. eh, good work kid.
2/13/2006 c1 210Kelpylion
Laughed my ass of but still felt the emotion -perhaps better, for having done AP chem last year and knowing just what you mean. I loved the connections with elemental properties, especially tungsten and chlorine, but everywhere in the poem, really. Fabulously creative.
210KelpylionLaughed my ass of but still felt the emotion -perhaps better, for having done AP chem last year and knowing just what you mean. I loved the connections with elemental properties, especially tungsten and chlorine, but everywhere in the poem, really. Fabulously creative.
2/6/2006 c1 56felicia13
Wow O.O . . . this is really good. I love the mixture of chemistry and attraction! You are so good . . . I'm putting this on my favs list!
Thanks for the review! I sorta got stuck on one topic (I try not to, I'm not sure if I succeed), so I decided to write an anthology. Did you read all 3? Or just the one?
Anywho, I think this a really pretty poem and I wish you the best of luck in your writing!
all my love,felicia
56felicia13Wow O.O . . . this is really good. I love the mixture of chemistry and attraction! You are so good . . . I'm putting this on my favs list!
Thanks for the review! I sorta got stuck on one topic (I try not to, I'm not sure if I succeed), so I decided to write an anthology. Did you read all 3? Or just the one?
Anywho, I think this a really pretty poem and I wish you the best of luck in your writing!
all my love,felicia
1/26/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This was simply wonderful. The amazing way that you weave and shift words and incorporate so many dimensions in your works is incredible. Great, great work.
879Moondog DozierThis was simply wonderful. The amazing way that you weave and shift words and incorporate so many dimensions in your works is incredible. Great, great work.
1/24/2006 c1 34poet tree
wow. extremely original. since i haven't taken chemistry yet, i don't understand the last stanza particularly, but it's lovely none the less.
34poet treewow. extremely original. since i haven't taken chemistry yet, i don't understand the last stanza particularly, but it's lovely none the less.
1/22/2006 c1 a lonely september
this made me smile like a dork. i love little things like this, the not-relationships that these types of poems are written about. this was an awesome poem. me loved. : )
this made me smile like a dork. i love little things like this, the not-relationships that these types of poems are written about. this was an awesome poem. me loved. : )
1/22/2006 c1 236mezzie
this caught at heartstrings and made me smile at the sheer genius of stringing in the elements and compounds etc like that. also had a good rush to it in reading that paralleled the situation nicely.
mezzie
236mezziethis caught at heartstrings and made me smile at the sheer genius of stringing in the elements and compounds etc like that. also had a good rush to it in reading that paralleled the situation nicely.
mezzie
1/22/2006 c1 2Shaker Maker
I love this too much. It's so awesomely tied together with chemistry. I hate Chem class but there is someone in there who makes it worth going to. Lovely job you've done here.
2Shaker MakerI love this too much. It's so awesomely tied together with chemistry. I hate Chem class but there is someone in there who makes it worth going to. Lovely job you've done here.
1/21/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
lol I love this. I'm impressed on how you were able to were able to tie chemistry with romance without using any cliche sayings. The first stanza is so so true. keep writing
144chaos called creationlol I love this. I'm impressed on how you were able to were able to tie chemistry with romance without using any cliche sayings. The first stanza is so so true. keep writing