for Spell1/22/2006 c1 
18an-angel-in-hell
It's good... but I think you meant 'you're' not 'your' and 'brake' not 'beak'...the rhyme scheme seems a little simple...but ut's a good idea, definatley!
18an-angel-in-hellIt's good... but I think you meant 'you're' not 'your' and 'brake' not 'beak'...the rhyme scheme seems a little simple...but ut's a good idea, definatley!