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5/30/2006 c1 62Amalia Jagd
i usually dont appreciate haikus, but i really like this one. it leaves the story still in your head. the emotion of hope too.
3/18/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
very cute & true
3/4/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
i LOVE the image the second line gives off. Such a daydreamer kind of poem. Wonderful
3/2/2006 c1 ode to a firefly
This is amazing...came at just the right time, too because it reminds me of someone I know who I was just discussing with a friend. Great poem, I love the formatting and the rhyme scheme. =)

~Christine~
3/2/2006 c1 131theory of black
I'm sending this to my friend. Its so good!
2/1/2006 c1 442CeruleanHeart
I really love all this work with the italics and bolds and stuff; it's very effective in conveying a certain emotion! This poem really contains a message that goes true for many, they dream and dream and never do. I like how you kind of leave it open for interpretation, like, you don't really specify whether you think daydreaming instead of going for it is a bad thing for some people or not. Spiffy poem! Keep it up!
1/22/2006 c1 34Smoky Bear
LOL, i laugh because i say something like that to my self everyday...

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