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4/20/2006 c1 20Autumn Dance
Ambiguous and haunting. clever use of lyrics- interesting and chancey use of description. I dunno some didn't seem to fit right but re reading it it made a sortof imprint. It's unusual. I like the Part on and two- good. It's all good. Well done x
1/23/2006 c1 13Nicole Michele
Wow, you are so powerful.

Part 2 brought it all home!

i love how you worded it great job.
1/22/2006 c1 36contrast and friction
This is just all too amazing.Pt2. was my favourite, it was so intense & the ending is just so powerful.You are a genius with words. Just another brilliant piece of writing.
1/22/2006 c1 a lonely september
'Keyboard soaring, electronica baby, suck my discotheque.' hah. this is pure beauty man. this whole poem was totally awesome. you may not be fred flinstone, but damn, you're rocking my bed right about now.
1/22/2006 c1 79Ashes.to.Acid
Wow! This was really wonderful, I envy your poetic talent..as Pink previously said, there were too many lines in this that are wonderful.
1/22/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
There's too many memorable lines in this to name. Great work i love this.

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