for Forgery3/18/2006 c1 
612simpleplan13
i like this... it's well done and those last 2 lines are so true... short & awesome
612simpleplan13i like this... it's well done and those last 2 lines are so true... short & awesome
1/30/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Excellent interior rhyme in this. The flow works so well due to your word placement. Very well done.
879Moondog DozierExcellent interior rhyme in this. The flow works so well due to your word placement. Very well done.