for one of us1/27/2006 c1 
4believe-in-happiness
Beautiful. I don't really know what else to say. I think the shortness of it just emphasises the importance. Fab!
4believe-in-happinessBeautiful. I don't really know what else to say. I think the shortness of it just emphasises the importance. Fab!
1/24/2006 c1 127Eirien
Beautiful, one can picture the person through your description. The (half)rhymes work nicely as well.
127EirienBeautiful, one can picture the person through your description. The (half)rhymes work nicely as well.
1/22/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Wonderful tone and description in this. The portrait of the person comes across mysteriously clear.
879Moondog DozierWonderful tone and description in this. The portrait of the person comes across mysteriously clear.
1/22/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
You rhymed stars and guitars. lol my simple mind is still in awe of that. Amazing job on this.
144chaos called creationYou rhymed stars and guitars. lol my simple mind is still in awe of that. Amazing job on this.
1/22/2006 c1 90poetic abortion
beautiful poem; the ryhmes are superbly excellant and not at all flat, they do not pester or annoy, nor sound forced. this is beautiful, beautiful.
~* noelle
90poetic abortionbeautiful poem; the ryhmes are superbly excellant and not at all flat, they do not pester or annoy, nor sound forced. this is beautiful, beautiful.
~* noelle