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3/6/2006 c1 131theory of black
I wouldn't want anything more =)
2/18/2006 c1 dark stars grace
very nice, the language makes it sound warm and sweet.
2/8/2006 c1 19Pink Sparrow
wow, love the way its written, I can really see it all in my head, very nice description. nice work.
2/7/2006 c1 80citrus scented
oh this is beautiful, really beautiful. the whole image is so vivid and moving you can almost touch it - really great piece, i love ur pen name btw.
2/3/2006 c1 10just a teardrop
this is lovely! great imagery :D
2/2/2006 c1 90poetic abortion
i have no favorite line and that frightens me, normally i do but when i don't it just helps me to know this is perfect (which it is). lovelovelove this. in particular, the ending is divine.

~* noelle
1/24/2006 c1 237classic violet
The ending is simply perfect. The title is gorgeous. Good job.
1/23/2006 c1 96Briar's Thorn
nicely done i can see it in my minds eye, very well done. you get a hug for such an awsome poem!

Thorn
1/22/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
I can't pick out my favourite line!This creates such a nice image, and the feeling is so dizzying. By far your best. love love love :) *favourite*
1/22/2006 c1 1R-Vega-X
What a wonderful image. Also nice username "airplanes in the sky". I even liked the title "star sprinkled sky". You're good at not only poetry, but titles too. Good work!

R-Vega-X

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