for A Box of Earth1/23/2006 c1 
4Pete the Petey
Hmm . . very interesting. I really liked the ending: sad and striking. I liked how you told the story of the Chinese woman's husband and how this dialogue seems like it could really happen. Lovely work.
4Pete the PeteyHmm . . very interesting. I really liked the ending: sad and striking. I liked how you told the story of the Chinese woman's husband and how this dialogue seems like it could really happen. Lovely work.